theres no way to say this without being a bitch so. what is the reason you wrote Bella so childish? all she does is pout and frown and throw fits. and she's soooo freaking clingy. I can't imagine from this point on there will be any decent character development with her. I hope you're aware that she's coming off that way

wow Bella is uh... childish and embarrassing when she's drunk lmao

so Edward doesn't think Bella is good enough for his family. he also doesn't mind the emotional cheating. he really thinks he's going to be with Tanya but not get married. he thinks it's not bellas place to ask about his relationship lol. yes it totally is, especially when she's flirting back. guess that says a lot about her too.

Bella reaps the rewards of Edwards occupation yet she bitches and throws tantrums when he has to work, while she sits on her ass.

Bella is a whiny, ungrateful, hypocrite.
She can have contact with her ex yet she gets jealous if someone even looks at Edward.
Please stop “crashing” your lips against each other and I’m tired of the “I love you’s”.

I’m starting to get annoyed with Bella. She is borderline selfish and childish. Edward has so much on his shoulders, and he’s always running to take care of her.
Grow up Bella.

The crap just keeps piling up.

I want to see Rose go down, big time!
It seems E & B, both are allowing other's to run their lives.

I was not expecting Charlie to show up. I thought he was long gone.

When will she become the “other woman “?

I'm curious about the dream she had. Was that foreshadowing?

I don’t understand how Angela was able to call her if her phone died!

I have just one thing to say to Edward.
“Grow a Pair “!

Maybe Edward should not be with anyone Denice his job is more important. He is an ass Bella deserves better. Even thy Bella see a little immature.

I truly enjoyed this story. I loved the twists and the love. thank you for sharing