Reviews for Finding Destiny |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Tu libro está hermoso, me está encantando! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Never read such a long Merlin story and had doubts, but from the first chapter I knew that I will read it till the end. Amazing! Especially first half of the story, Arthur's interactions with the child Merlin are prisious. It was an open field, through we never saw how he would react to children in the show. So many beautifull and veery funny moments. Truth be told, I think you overestimated capabilities of Merlin's powers, but entartaintment and satisfaction of those Boom! scenes made me forgive you) Thank you for not leaving this masterpiece despite your sad situation. Definitely on top of my favourite stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "It was then that Arthur realized he'd just played hide and seek with his manservant. The king of Camelot… playing a children's game… with Merlin…" - I am DEAD loool "Arthur had a rather disturbing image of his manservant sitting on an egg like a chicken" oh My GoD my stomach hurts StOoop |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very sweet and funny story that was well-written and captivating. I read it all in one go and I enjoyed it a lot. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Truly amazing! I loved it, brilliant writing, kept me hooked the entire time. Amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh darling, I'm so sorry. I know I'm a bit late, but your mother would be proud of you. I'm religious as well, so I'll pray for her, and I'm truly sorry. When I first heard, my heart broke and when I read that she was cured, I literally jumped with joy. I can't imagine losing my mum, and my heart goes out to you. The story is amazing by the way, I love it. It's one of the best I've read. |
![]() ![]() Hmm calling a five year old an idiot I don't condone :( |
![]() ![]() Aw, beautiful story! I loved how you showed Merlin and Arthur’s bond! They really are like brothers! The only problem I had is that this story ended! Haha, it was a really good read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You found my weakness . . . It's floppy-pointer wide-brim warlock hats. *CRIIIIIIIIINNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGE* |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was fantastic. The only thing I thought was a little out of character was Arthur’s constant declarations of his affection for Merlin; it seemed a little over the top. But other than that, well done! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I'M DROWNING IN BROTHER FLUFFINESS OMJUICE I LOVE THIS SO MUCH ITS TOO CUTE! :D:D:D I have nothing left to say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cette fiction était génial. Je me demande si je vais dire ça à chacune de tes histoire ? En tout cas c'est sur ,tu as le talent pour écrire et narrer des histoires. Tu reprends un concept (le rajeunissement) mais tu ne focalise pas toute ton histoire juste sur ce point. Beaucoup d'autre aurait arrêté leur histoire au moment où merlin est redevenu adulte. Toi tu ne l'a pas fait et c'est tant mieux. J'ai beaucoup ris et ressenti les émotions en te lisant, c'est très rafraîchissant comme lecture. J’espère être aussi surprise en lisant tes autres œuvres, encore bravo :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() References! Kay called Arthur wart in "the sword in the stone" XD, great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're a wiza-eh dragonlord Har-no MERLIN! A DRAGONLORD, MERLIN! Just saz this scene in my head when i saw the dialogue and the reaction XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it so much! 3333 Thank you for writing this. I love how you brought back the night sky and Arlin there at the end ( I mean, five-year old Merlin is the whole premise of this story, so bringing him back seems fitting.). |