update please!

thanks for writing. hope to see your new revised story tomorrow.

Didn't expect humor; good show matey.

waiting for the new improvements to come

You mean to say the posted chapters aren't rewrite? If not, why are you editing & changing? This is an excellent ongoing fiction. there is an intriguing plot, good grammar & spelling. So it isn't perfect. You are not a professional writer, although better than some I've read. Fanfiction is where you practice & improve. Keep going, build in changes as they are developed. Take a little time to flesh out characters, giving them more depth. Example, Ron. In the early chapters he was shallow, figuring what he wanted would fall into his lap without working for it. Everything was someone else's fault. In chap 9 he's grown enough to realize a lot of this is his problem, and an apology is necessary. Growth. Please continue, this is too good to either abandon or ignore. Thanks for letting me rant.

I say a new story even if it's behind the scenes so that you can do this story how you want it not how hater and flamers say it should

As I detest these chapters consisting of 1-5-6 words, applause for promising 4K. Just make sure it's 4K, not 3999 word count. Disappointment would abound. (hope you realize the only sentence meant is the 1st one) Great story.

wonderful! There are several fanfics out there where Harry coming from another school has his own domicile, never seen one using the ROR for everything. Great idea. Please have the scene where McGonagall read the Gryffindors the riot act. Having the sorting hat be head of house was inspired. Kudos

Love the long chapters. Long may they live! Excellent story, decent grammar and few spelling errors make for great readers.

Sorry hit send before I was finished with my review. As o was saying I like your Hermione and she's fun. Not to bossy or demanding. Even Ron seems like he fits. I always thought he was a decent kid in over his head. S bit spoiled and immature but with his heart in the right place ypuve shown he can grow up. In case I've enjoyed this a lot. It's been fun to read and kept me going. I've had shoulder surgery and a few other health issues so reading one of the few things I can do. Having good fan fic a sanity saver. Thanks for writing.

Fire Wolfe aka Lisa

I dont know why you think you need to change this work. I've been enjoying it from the start. It's different and new. I like that . If it was the same as jkr works what be the point of I agree about Draco I like the idea of him going a bit crazy. The only real problem is there no context. What did he lost it? Hermione a great character who can be developed more. She just seems a bit in the background but she's not just a pretty face.

Your title is a far more accurate description of the tournament. Good start.

Do a new story. Comments are hard to follow the other way

Is it not better to delete and repost the fanfic later on. Then you can restart from scratch. Great story so far.

Hiatus stories stop, rewrites die a strangulated death!