this is a damn good story argh

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Aww! I love this! This is so well written, and I love how everything turned out. It was truly an amazing story. Nice work!

This fic was great. I look forward to reading more from you in the future. Keep up the good work. ;)

Another starco fic woo lame

A good ending to a sweet, emotional rollercoaster of a story. I hope to see more from you in the future

I HAD NO IDEA!
WOW REALLY GRAT FANFIC!
i kinda cried

Jackie

YES. YOU SHOULD DEFINETLY MAKE IT CHAPTERS

Starcooooo

Starco please

YOU MADE ME FUCKING CRY.

As much as Marco believes he is happy with Jackie, I think he would find himself much happier with Star, or if anything, he'll say no to both of them for the intention of not hurting either of them more than the other, but ultimately making it worse. Star and Jackie will probably have to reconcile one way or another, and maybe Pony Head will confess to taking matters into her own "hands".

FEELS

This is really good so far! keep up the great work
and as for the choice, depending on how long you actually want this story to be, I'd say Marco should choose Jackie out of pressure, but come to realize he should have chosen Star all along. or if you want to make it short... well, Star.