Oh Yes! I was NOT expecting a Sequel Threesome Chapter! Way to go!

Could u add more to it with more of rock, revy, and eda I love those three together

I would recommend using a different word choice from "pussy" when describing a woman's private region. Only reason is the word appeared 11 times in the fic altogether, and it would be better to vary it up.

You're braver than me in attempting to write a threesome - I've never done that before. Good job keeping everyone in character in this.

Also, I like how Rock is tender toward Revy at the end of this.

You've gotten better at your prose and grammar. Good work on that.

"Rocky Junior" admittedly made me crack a smirk. I like how it's Revy who's pouncing on Rock. That's honestly how I see their dynamic.

Only thing I would advise is you might want to consider moving this to AO3. This site tends to crack down on explicit fics, so be careful.

Aw, Revy won’t admit, much like her character in the anime/manga, that she is jealous and has, whatever the romantic equivalent for her is, for Rock. Look forward to more!
Also, so entertaining to see Eda get it, only to somewhat play along and overcome both of them, but mainly Revy haha.

XD

That ending was pretty funny. You know that Rock and Revvy if nothing else thought about it.

This is good. Thanks.

Interesting read that's for sure. I really like the twist at the end because that's something i wasn't expecting at all. I wasn't even expecting Rock and Revy to get it on. Nice Build up and good job not making any of this predictable. It was a good read.

Write a sequel. You can't end it here.

Lol, should have guessed that Revy wasn't behind it. Great Story though! Good job!