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Your English is quite good! Keep writing!

This is really good so far and there are not that many stories that focus on Tina and Credence so it should be interesting to see where this story will go. It would be interesting to see in future chapters Credence coming to grips with what he is and what that means.

Will there be more? There are to few fics involving Credence. Has for ideas perhaps some talking between Credence and Tina in relation to the first time they met and she tried to help when he was being attacked.

Great work so far. On the one hand I can kind of understand the Ministry wanting to "deal" with Credence but on the other hand he is a unique case that deserves other options to be explored. Has for ideas, perhaps if it was not given back to Newt maby have Credence's obscurus interact with the one in the bubble in some way.

I have to say that the american ministry is very backwards I would much rather be in Landon. I love your story bty.

Before I go on with the review, let me just click "Follow Story" first :D
There are so many stories about Credence living with Tina or Newt or anyone nice. I mean, who doesn't want that? But yours involving MACUSA keeps me interested.

In defense of President Picquery though, since she was offered to choose from all four houses of illvermorny, she must had a level of inner quality. But being a President herself required her to be as stern as Professor McGonagall, maybe even more so, so perhaps she was the one making hard decisions and eventually became the one people blame (politics, ugh).

As for what I want from your story... I don't have anything specific. I suggest you try writing Credence's interaction with other people, maybe the staff in MACUSA, because I've seen many stories which are just him staying indoors like a house pet and talking with only one or two characters.

Anyway, good luck and have fun! :D

Oh this was great! Please continueeeee

This is getting really good! Credence deserves all the love in the world but I bet macusa won't let him leave or be happy because of what he is. ugh

Wonderful can't wait for next udate!

I'm really hooked. Will you include Graves in your story? What about Grindelwald? Can't wait!

newt! I would love to see more Newt and his beasts :) Great chapter!

I didn't love the people at macusa either, who the hell shots a kid? But yeah it could have gone better
Next chapter you could give us more Queenie/Jacob? thank you!

This had peaked my interest and I look forward to reading more in the future. Well if your looking for suggestions perhaps some interactions between Queenie and Credence along the lines of her coaxing him out of his obscuras state in the cells. Not the wild destructive storm but the state he was in when New found him in subway. It just seems to me with her powers Queenie would be able to read the situation better while MACUSA wizards would be thinking the kid is about to go nuts again and rampage.

Oh, this is getting good! I don't think Picquery was being fair in the movie either. Since you asked if there was anything I wanted to see in the next chapters, well... I don't know if this is too much to ask, seeing as it would affect the length of the story, but could you do a bit of a slow burn with the character bonding? I know the characters bonded quite quickly in the movie, at least so far as life-and-death decisions go, because of circumstances. I don't expect they'd lose that trust in each other. But for the most part, all the main characters are still practically strangers save for Tina and need time to know and appreciate the little things about each other. That's what I'd love to see most.