This story is in my all time top favorite stories about handsome Jack. Even if you don’t continue it, just know it is extremely well written and very engrossing

Amazing work. It is hard to find something good about Jack. You managed to create a believable Jack. The way he talks and acts screams Jack. All your conversations and monologs are great. The only huge minusbof your work is a second person and no name. You should write it 1 person,bevause it doesn't make your story beautiful. You should create your own character, because no matter how hard you try for us to imagine ourselves in her place, she is not us, she is yours. I hate stories Y/N, but I could hate yours. 7 out if 10, and only for the Y/N and second person. All in all, great work!

Even God would resurrect this mighty work. I loved this— binged it all until finishing it at 3:30 AM. I don’t normally say that about non-lemons lmfao but this was great. For the chapters you published during its run, this title was awesome. Thank you for this world you so vividly wrote to life!

Hi yes this is absolutely fantastic! I loved every word of it

Oh no! Please update soon. Can't leave a girl hanging like this!

...Okay so I just found out the hard way that emojis don't work on reviews AND you can't review the same chapter twice haha soo yeah there was meant to be a laughing face and a winking face and a grinning face at the end of the review there... but without them it just looks rude and I swear I wasn't trying to be! Hahaha seriously your an amazing writer and I can't wait to read the next chapter! I read this whole story in one sitting and it's just so amazing! Thank you for creating it hahaha

I absolutely love your story! Seriously 10/10! I was reluctant to even read it cause I usually hate 2nd person stories and stories that call the protagonist y/n cause seriously? I just read it as y/n I don't actually use a different name so it just seems kinda pointless ya know? Haha anyways! I really hope you update soon cause YOU LEFT IT ON A CLIFFHANGER!

I AM SCREAMING! OH MY GOSH! This is seriously fantastic! I'm genuinely so excited to see this get updated!

Okay, so I've just read all this in one sitting (a very late night/early time might I add). I'd safely say 90% of that time I wore a wolfish grin reading this in the character's respective voices. Yeah, it's that good. You had me at sassy cupcake; keep it up.

Oh my goodness this is absolutely amazing! Im so so so in love with it! AND THE CLIFFHANGER

WHY

Please please please update soon! This is just so stunning and well written and im obsessed!

Angel dammit, pick a side! But really, this was another great chapter- I cannot wait to see what happens once Jack confronts the MC about the pen!

I can't believe how in-character you've made Jack's rejection speech! "I can dial it down a notch" had me howling!

I tend to think of "YEN" whenever I see Y/N so an OC wouldn't make all that much of a difference to me but if it means being able to read more of your writing, I'm down. I'm down baby!

ahh i cabt wait for the new chapter ! :D

Mmmm Zer0 is bae.