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Woke up to smell the ashes chapter 1 . 12/16/2018
Update? I mean its almost been 2 years Unless life not giving you any time to sit down then I understand but Tell us you know? It's frustrating when people just stop.
Riverdog chapter 2 . 3/6/2018
I say Naruto gets Serina as his personal AI from Halo Wars and his Armor is the Hayabusa with a Katana. I also say Naruto Cal stay with Chief all the way through until the end of Halo 4 this way Naruto and the Arbiter can form a friendship and also so the Librarian can give the human gene advancement to be immune to the composer the Diadact uses. Hope you update soon!
Jkc86 chapter 2 . 2/26/2017
I say the start of Halo 2 events for A.I. should be T.A.I from Transformers Robots in Disguise 2001 cartoon show a smart A.I, KOS-MOS from Xenosaga smart A.I or T-ELOS from Xenosaga smart A.I those are mine three choices hope you get a new laptop I can wait.
Guyver333 chapter 2 . 2/23/2017
fun start looking forward to more
Mirai Arashi chapter 2 . 2/16/2017
Love the concept of the story hope to see this updated soon.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/8/2017
I have a dumb question why not just give a nnod to red vs blue and give naruto a freelancer whole situation aka church in full or make a separate one that's new or something
Evinco chapter 2 . 2/7/2017
You may what to have a few researchers continue to investigate the shinobi world in the background. Remember, The "bunny" god is huge part of their power and from an unknown alien race. These are Lovecraftian levels of unknowns and the power transfers through meditative touch.
This means normal soldiers can have powers without knowledge of how it happened.
Having the fear of the unknown element can help the story.
Sabere Commander chapter 2 . 2/6/2017
I know how it is typing on a phone from personal experience. I feel for you but trust me that it could be worse. Have you ever tried typing out a decent chapter on an XBOX 360? Trust me, it can be much worse.

While the Naruto characters are definitely powerful, I believe the unintentional nerfing of the Haloverse is unnecessary. There are A LOT of inconsistencies in Naruto, this is something we have to accept. FOr instance, why in the hell do they still use kunai if a ninja can survive being sent flying and rag dolled? Yet throwing stars are capable of killing them.

There was a special "mythos" series that was made for Halo called Halo: Legends and inside of that series they have a very Naruto-ish short with a Spartan II, 1337, and it was made/directed by the person who helped with the Dragon Ball Z anime. You can use that as a reference point for the power scaling between the two.

It's just a problem comes from taking "anime" physics and then using them in a world far closer to being grounded in reality. If it were up to me, I would set Naruto as 2 prior to the enhancements and then scale him up to 4.5 after them. Then if we add armor I think a 6.5 would be better. We don't want this to be a one sided stomp, most of Halo content is based in the ground action and tension from it.

Also, I believe the suite multiplies the Spartans capabilities, not stacks on to them. I remember it being x5 better and then a x7 multiplier for the suite but if we use yours then 3x better gets turned into 15x better. I know the armor multiplies their abilities, I remember that much from my Halo craze.

Anyways, I know there is no difference between Hayabus and Mjolnir except look but I think Naruto needs to earn that armor and it not just given to him for no other reason but the sake of the joke.

Also, I'm think about something, if Naruto doesn't have Chakra anymore-which is a key component for Ninja feats from Naruto-then he's essentially a little kid again because he doesn't have the power behind those feats. Also, I don't see why the power would really come into play this early. Shouldn't he still have trouble using it or even accessing it? Besides, I think "God-Like" Naruto is one of the stupidest ways to portray a character, ever.

Just remember this, make him earn it. There should never be a reason to O.P. a person in any other fic but a parody one. If there's no tension and Naruto is practically immortal to anything but the most extreme methods available to the Covenant than it makes for a dull story.

As for Halo 1 or 2, I don't know. I came into the Fandom with Halo 3, ODST, and Halo Wars.
Oniele chapter 2 . 2/3/2017
Thank you for the heads up~!

Can't say anything about her being there, surprise me would be my answer.
a.marsh55 chapter 2 . 2/2/2017
Halo events.
Sabere Commander chapter 1 . 1/31/2017
Well, I liked the way this first chapter is set up. I especially like how Naruto was put into their universe. Kind of going against the flow by using the good old black whole trick there.

As for Naruto and his armor. Hayabus is cool and all but too many people give it to their protagonist with out a good IN-UNIVERSE reason. Yes we all see the joke of Naruto getting the Hayabus armor, it has been done before. I don't see a reason Naruto shouldn't just get the standard Mjolnir armor, which resonates a feeling of power and sturdiness.

As for the A.I.s no, I don't think Cortana should be given to Naruto. Doesn't Naruto still have Kuruam/The Nine Tailed Fox? Plus the connection between Master Chief and Cortana is kind of special and I just don't see the same bond forming with Naruto in the mix. Master Chief needs Cortana so he can grow as a character where as Naruto does all the growing on his own.

Thanks for posting the story! Please update!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2017
First thing is first, I have no idea what this Galel power is. All I can ask of you is that you don't go overboard with Naruto and his abilities. If there's no conflict, no tension, the no one will want to read. Naruto lacks the combat experience of this universe, so it would be best to display that. I imagine he'll become more friendly with the SPARTANs as they all grow closer together. One thing that I have to question, how is Naruto going to handle the whole naked tolerance training the Spartans have to undergo?

As for armor choice, give him the Mjolnir in the beginning and then after he accomplishes a few feats give him the Hayubus armor. There's no reason to give it to him right off the bat. Make him warm it, he doesn't like it being handed over to him anyways, he believes in hard work.

Some else commented on using Naruto's tissue to enhance the Spartan project. Don't, as far a they know he's just a cynical kid who had to grow up too early. Additionally, the others don't have chakra systems for Naruto's DNA to even play a factor in giving them chakra. Besides, they're already awesome :D

Naruto is fine the way he is but I recommend some caution. Naruto is acting a bit like Sasuke, as in gloomy and not really great to be around, so be careful. Nothing ruins a story like unexplained character change... Or over powered characters...

Anyways, update already! I'm dying to know what happens!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
I think you should have Cortana be Naruto's AI anyway good job
Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2016
This is the best Halo Naruto xover I've read. He should have HAYABUSA and Cortana as his AI.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2016
I think he should have the HAYABUSA armour and have Cortana.
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