I would like to see a sequel to this story where’s theres war going on and red’s home town gets invaded or war torn that would make a great story

Wow! I think this may be my new favourite fanfic! Well, where do I begin? Let’s start with characters.

I like how Red and Faelen’s relationship seems to flow well. When I read the part about the imprint, I was worried that it was going to be a shoddy twilight knock off, but I was very pleased to find out it wasn’t. Now, Red’s friends... Bo and Goldie were some really great friends. I liked how they were there for each other and you could see how they genuinely cared for each other. Muffy seemed to be just... there (also I keep picturing the Arthur character) Jack was slightly one noted as a villain, and it was hard to see how Red and Jack could be friends, but I did think it was interesting how Jack got isolated (But was shocked to see Jack get a love interest.) also, which Jack is he? Bean stock? and Jill? Be nimble? Horner? Or a combination. All in all, this story was a real treat that I was happy to read from beginning to end. I hope you continue it, as I’d really like to see what happens after ever after

BUTTERCHICKEN! I genuinely thought you were going to kill off Red! How could you? Jack! You’ve gone way too far, you Yandere! You should have let Faelen rip you to shreds!

:( poor Baby bear. My heart breaks for Goldie... why does the breaking of an imprint have to kill your soul?

NOOOOO! Faelen! How could you abandon Red? She was your mate! Why did you have to listen to that ass?

Jack, you asshole! Stay far away from Red! She deserves Faelen and you need to fade away!

INTERUPTED LOVE CONFESSIONS?! How dare you?

These two are so adorable! But I’m also wondering about Goldie...

Aww! Yay! He came back! Uh oh! Now I’m scared to what Jack is going to do! Still, wonder what’s going to happen to Red, now she’s his wolf queen. Plus.

I like how you were able to expand on the relationship between Red and Bo. It doesn’t just feel like Bo’s there to be there, usually romances gloss over their friends (unless they hook up) plus, no shit Sherlock!

Ooh, we finally get to meet the infamous Blue. Also, does Jack remind anyone else of Gaston from Beauty and the Beast, or Steele from Balto? They want their girls at all cost, even if they chose other... wolfish people.

Aww, that was... sweet. Gory but sweet.

Ha! I laughed throughout this chapter. Jack, you’d better get some ointment for that burn. Also, come now, Goose. 42 is the answer to EVERYTHING!

Am I the only one who noticed that you literally named the wolf Wolf? Still, very good. I like that even though Faelen has a human way of thinking, he still has his animal side (also, is he technically a senior citizen for being 23 in human years?)

So... where do I begin? I have a friend who is addicted to this story, and after a bit, I decided to read it myself to see what I thought, and from the first chapter alone, I’m definitely not disappointed. You started well, and kept the flow well. I like how you slipped other fairy l tale characters in their too. Can’t wait to read the rest.