Love the story hope you continue it.

I am lost

More please this is a good series

Hadn't yet seen the power of the Royal Nazerik Navy. Was impressive. Looking forward to more!

I love it! :-) Please continue.

nice

the idea of the story is nice but there are a bit of a problem, lets begin with the basic technology of nazarick. Your readers has zero knowledge how your technology looks like, for example your ships you just keep saying ship, or armed ship its like saying the ship is big(its obvious that its big) you need to describe the thing more so your readers has a proper image of how things looks like. You don't have have timeline of technological advancement or any detail of the advance technology of nazarick. Next problem is that the chapters are rush, its noticeable on how you write it. Its shows lack of interest in the story. Chapters are short, lack of description, unflesh-out characters, boring conversation and black scenery of the story. And base on your authors note i'm correct, Advice is that rewrite this story. First imagine your world, create your technological advancement timeline, create a interstellar structure for your empire, what happend in the new world, how does it progress towards space travel, did Ainz level up and discover new things ,etc. Imagine what advance world will look like under Ainz who live before in a advance future humanity. This will make your imagination juice to run and gives you idea on how to progress. Second did you play mass effect because somehow you look like you didn't play mass effect or has little knowledge of it advice to read some fact at wiki or play the game and read data pacts during walk-through. So far the idea is good but the story needs some rewrite or work on it. Ps if you don't know what tech advance look like try looking at mass effect fanfic with the idea of advance humanity or humanity advance more in technological part etc.