Awwww so cute :D

D'Awwwee! 3

This is really sweet! I was wondering when and how Misty came back to join them, and to find out it's Ash who NEGOTIATES it down to four months for her is just...

(It's as if he matures and grows for her, oh man).

The "looking at the same _" trope is what is typically used, but switching it up with rain was brilliant (especially considering how water seems to bring them together).

MandyQ

Aww such a sweet story! Love it! is it a one shot or are you thinking of writing a reunion? Love, love, love it!

No, Ash. There's NO WAY anyone has figured it out. Nope, all coincidence. Yeah, you're such a pro at hiding it, how could anyone ever figure it out? XD
I also laughed at Brock and nurse Joy. Poketreat? Poor guy.

Its a good read.