Reviews for It's Not Fair! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() awwww mikey beh happy or i will make with one of my awsome hugz! ... XDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww! That was so sweet! |
![]() ![]() I wanted to just cuddle Mikey in this! It was awesome! |
![]() ![]() really sweet |
![]() ![]() i almost cried. Only one word can describe this: amazing. This is how i get ideas for my reading this kind of writing. BOOYAKASHA! :-P :-3 |
![]() ![]() God I am crying it was that awesome! Poor mikey now everything Is good u rule! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this fic, it's like one of the first fics I ever read and one that made me say, 'aawwww' and i love it sooo much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute, but they don't have a sister. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i thought it was okay, but i didn't really like it. even though they were all five years old, i like them being fifteen better. and the little sister thing-Magnolia? what was that about? keep working on it, but out of ten, this story, at best, was probably a 7. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh that was wonderful! I see alot of myself in what you wrote! I was one of the kids to fume in injustice and glare at a wall for hours on end I'f I felt that Life was being unfair. A couple of times I vowed never to speak to my family again. It would last about a day... or until I forgot I wasn't soppose to be speaking to any of them. lol Wonderful story and wonderful writing! I felt every word within my heart! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was pretty cool. Don't often see Leo lying. Kind of funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i liked it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! I love it! It has a Moral! Every great story has some moral that can be derived from it's words! Such good stuff. You should do more, MUCH more! /\/\ikey rules! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so sad and sweet! It brought tears to my eyes. I enjoyed it SO much that I'm adding it to my faves! I love Mikey very much and it pains me to see him treated SO horribly! I think you match the character personalities very well! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. I think the relationship between Splinter and Mikey is brilliant, and despite his age I could see Mikey reacting this way more than his brothers, being more sensitive. It's brilliant, and well written. |