Reviews for The Aftermath |
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![]() ![]() ![]() damn that was good I can't wait for more |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Omygosh! Love this story! I've just finished the game and was craving some aftermath stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice! It's truly wonderful to get someone back into writing! Thank you for listening to your reviewers!I kinda spotted a few errors that would give the old spell check a slip, probably because you rushed a little with this chapter? Understandable since you got back after a long time. Anyway, I'd like to thank you again for updating this! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maybe you don’t write much fiction now but you don’t have lost your talent this was the best chapter, thank you for finaly update and not abandone us. I’m happy with this ending even if i will love to read another in the futur. Many thaaaaaanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() This deserves to be continued, it just so appropriately portrays the aftermath and is so well done... I hope you get around to updating this and your academics are going well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn! The effort just to take a shower... Nicely done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You really made the change in Lara clear here, it was very well done, especially how she reacted to strangers on the ship. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I got the same feeling as you put into words here when I was playing the game! Anyway, apart from one error this was a nearly perfect chapter. said error being Samantha's last name being spelt 'Nishirumi' instead of 'Nishimura'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good, loved it! Such an intimate moment between the two ladies. Love the idea of Sam trying to distract Lara from her discomfort. Who would have thought showering could be so interesting? Ha! Looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() and i slowly find myself shipping these 2 together hardcore. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is to cool ! you HAVE to post the next chapter pleaaaaase can't wait ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good! |
![]() ![]() so cool ! can't wait the next chapter, pleaaaaaaaase ! |