The part where she complains about her tears in chapter two (I am pretty sure) is taken from the Pegasus series by Kate O’Hearn and other than that I think this is great.

Hello, sorry not to be better news about my thoughts on this chapter/ story.
The text is all wonky, I really don't even know how to describe it. I've seen it a few times before, I think you can fix it easily, but right now it's in computer script of some sort...
The last line currently reads
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Once I can actually read it, I promise to do so happily!

I really like this and I hope to see more. It's really good

Plz continue really good!

hello the bear who writes are u going to update soon

Could you please contineu the story, I'd love to see how it plays out. And I really enjoy your writhing too ️