Reviews for After the Storm
DestinySkyDemon chapter 12 . 9/12
Hot take: Weiss is the new witch. Only evidence I got is that Weiss had unnatural healing. And I guess it would be an interesting narrative.
iamking chapter 22 . 9/3
Good chapter. I loved the bits about Weiss' semblance. The Whiterose flirting was (as always) quite fun as well.
Samuel Warshaw chapter 16 . 9/1
I don’t know if you correct it in later chapters, but Honorifics such as Doctor, Mister, Mistress are capitalized, and if shortened, are capitalized and have a period after the honorific. Dr. Mr. Ms. etc.
snoopykid chapter 22 . 8/28
Lol I was just thinking about this story last night and was planning on re-reading it. It was awesome as always! Looking forward to more soon
elfbs chapter 21 . 8/28
hmmm... if Kali will manage to get the full story - and i guess they aren't comfortable to tell anything if they're not all together - then it means Weiss will learn she WAS there with them, in a way or another. I mean, those dreams are too close to what happened to be just that, dreams that is.
Or you will come out with a totally differrent explaination ad i will feel like an idiot :D
BTW, if R and W keep it on like this, them getting to gethere will be somethink like
"Ruby, it suddenly occurred to me that i may harbor romantic feelings toward you"
"Holy cookie, Weiss, i love you too"
"Excellent, should we make our relationship more official then?"
"Sure thing girlfriend. So... wanna spar?"
"Ofc, lead the way"
:D :D

anyway, good job.
IanAlphaAxel chapter 22 . 8/28
Absolutely love it!
Potterheads2016 chapter 22 . 8/28
Hopefully things go smoothly. Thanks for the update. Short or not, something is better than nothing!
Potterheads2016 chapter 21 . 8/28
Just started this today and read through it when I had free moments. When you said slow burn you weren't kidding. However the relationship dynamics you have put together are great and I look forward to more! Keep up the amazing work!
Nightcore25 chapter 1 . 8/17
This slow burn is killing me but it's so good. Its so worth it. I find myself reading it over and over again. I love how it's written. It keeps me interested even after reading it twenty times only to have me asking for more.
nsilver chapter 21 . 8/3
my god this chapter is great the ending best line especally the circumstances the circumstances of the two dorks makes it much more funny be even funnier if weiss ends up telling kali what happened when ruby teased blake and yang back in the school i dont know why but i feel that be really funny
Guest chapter 21 . 7/17
Slow burns aren't a problem for me. If anything, realistically paced dramas dealing with friendship, trauma, trust and self discovery are kinda my jam. And this one is top notch for sure! Can't wait for next update whether it's a month from now or longer. :)
Power Taco chapter 21 . 7/4
I adore the build up for relationships before the pay off. Makes it feel more real, or earned I suppose. So thanks for writing this. I do have to agree that I'd like to see them get together but I mean with this quality of writing I'm down for waiting. I do have to wonder how Salem almost broke RR. I'm assuming Weiss is involved maybe taunting her in her form about failing her, that she could never like her, and she was worthless, that sort of thing basically praying on her deepest insecurities from the person who means the most to her, and probably forcing her to kill her in that form. Hell if she's that vindictive she probably spent her dying breaths still mocking her in that form, or it could be something totally different.

I recently got into the fandom and I'll be honest I don't care if Whiterose is canon it's the only one I really, really like so it's nice to read super high quality stuff like this. Take it easy and stay safe. Also good luck on your BA!
Cun chapter 21 . 6/14
I really like your approach to this story; it feels like you're writing about the characters themselves, rather than the ships. Which means they feel much closer to their canon selves than what I'm used to for a romance fic, and the relationships comes as a consequence of that - rather than the shipping focus forcing the characters in one or another direction.

I prefer your way of doing it by far!
iamking chapter 21 . 6/10
Good chapter. Really like the characterization.
DT610 chapter 21 . 6/10
I just discovered your story today, and have read the entire thing. I absolutely love it. It's one of the best-written stories on this site that I've read. I love how you've gone to the effort of the slow-burn in regards to Wiess and Ruby. If they weren't so great as friends, then I might have found it frustrating, that's how great this story is. I really like how you've focused on the psychological impact on all of the girls, each one is struggling with something, and outside of their respective pairs doesn't seem to know what to do to help each other. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story progresses and eagerly await the next update. in the meantime, good luck with the uni work
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