Reviews for Indominatable Will, Heart of Fire |
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Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2018 PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON |
Tom2011 chapter 5 . 10/29/2017 Strange story but I like it. |
KnowPein chapter 5 . 9/16/2017 man update this one soon plz |
KnowPein chapter 4 . 9/16/2017 I am loving this story "Chakra less Naruto" great start till now... so there is no uchiha massacare till now ? would like know more about nana and naruto's back story... Asuma & Kuenia seemed liked bitch here kurenai got shocked though :D |
my 2 guys chapter 5 . 5/17/2017 that was good keep the chapters coming |
thor94 chapter 4 . 5/7/2017 so naruto body can absorb any chakra sentto him, that means any elemental jutsu (fire, water, sand, lightning, ice, etc) would be absorbed and have no effect on naruto like it was a little breeze? if yes it could be a bit interesting, if not, i can't see how naruto could become strong (like an itachi, jinchuriki, or any rank A-S shinobi) without giving him a new power (something like chakra able to control all element and nature but better, stronger, faster in a seconds without use handsign) |
thor94 chapter 3 . 5/7/2017 from you previous author note: more tact and control? this naruto his far worse and out of control than his canon self. even manga naruto wouldn't try something that stupid. |
Moonacre BunBun chapter 5 . 4/28/2017 Poor kitty... |
Moonacre BunBun chapter 1 . 4/28/2017 WHAT AN INTERESTING TWIST AND SOMETHING OFTEN UNEXPLORED IN FANFICTIONS AND IN KISHIMOTO-SENSEI's WORLD! SO EXCITED TO READ THIS! |
TimothyB chapter 5 . 4/28/2017 This is a very interesting story. I really look forward to more! |
Wabadoo chapter 5 . 4/28/2017 Oh, you're back! Fantastic, I'll need to re-read all the previous chapters since you've said they've been re-written. I enjoyed the mission, and as much as I expected more of a reaction to Naruto's sister, it's probably more realistic to have a minor reaction. I also don't think I've seen Tsunade come up this early, I wonder what you have planned between her and the Uzumaki, and possibly Yakumo. |
SonJubbi chapter 5 . 4/28/2017 This is awesome and I loved what you did at the end I can't wait for the next chapter please update soon thank you |
marquis.shax chapter 1 . 4/28/2017 yea Naruto without chakra that's the dumbest thing i've EVER read and I've read a lot of REALLY REALLY dumb shit. First of all he's an Uzumaki which is a clan secondly his father was a Hokage and his Mother was a previous Jinchuriki so that means even if he didn't get made a jinchuriki himself he'd be born with a boat load of chakra |
HaretaSora chapter 4 . 12/11/2016 I like what you have up to here. Very well written and the way you write the characters is refreshing from the usual way they are always done. Nice to see Kiss-Shot and my idea is doing well in your hands Interested to see what you have plnned in the coming chapters. Keep up the great work |
BoltItou-ku RT chapter 4 . 11/21/2016 cool. |