Reviews for through the flames
andrewpine chapter 13 . 5/14
She needs to come to the realization that every time she burned someone it was to protect her from harm.
I cannot wait to see how she is once they turn her and she gets control of her gift.
Update soon.
I gather that means she will be able to wipe out the whole Volturi if they come sniffing around.I don't think they will be able to keep her gift a secret for eternity.
I am surprised that Aro hasn't tried to" recruit" her into the guard,unless he doesn't know about her gift which I am surprised if the Sasha event had happened I figured he had read her before she was burned. or had read Eleazar.
Think you meant Phoenix,Arizona not Alaska.
Guess it is a good thing to have shield for protection when your mate is a firestarter that can't control her gift yet.
andrewpine chapter 3 . 5/14
Please tell me she will meet the Cullens and get to kill Eddie because he is an idiot.
Curious to find out what Irina's gift is.
Why is she so sad and upset that she was defending herself?
So just how old is she?
Doesn't Irina realize that she rescued her mate from a life in the streets?
andrewpine chapter 2 . 5/14
I would love to see disclosures saying epilogue after all of this time.
Timthrawn97 chapter 13 . 4/16
Please write more of this excelleng story
Debbie Hicks chapter 13 . 3/31
then ALIEN RTATTLESANAKES The bitte her as al of the more drained her alive suddenly Glowing lights of flames That's it you'r Sushi twin fingers herself began meditating held up her ward a strangest alien training changed her flames then suddenly Rin Jin Shi Chi Kai Zai Bai Tou Rypu Pryu twirling floating her now Golden eyes blazing into fiery fury I Call the powers of BETAZED GREAT FIREBALLS CHARGE! Focusing her thoughts and mind by improving her powers but chanting out very loudest then Threw her fire like Vampire Princesss Miyu EVIL SPIRIT BE EXORCIZED! Gasp too late BE PURIFIED! Sounds of a ancient Japanese temple drum herself was causing fun and was causing Vampires to freak out BETAZED TOXIC FOREST FIRE IGNITE! Blacking out good guilty where's your maker then suddenly kidnapped brought there good turn her/the best friends after both they did herself had Anmesia was still meditating always calm but focused the used her ward of flames both torn heads-cords then then herself/they both with three found herself in a fit of fiery then bitten Aliens/Vulcans then threew the Drained them alive to regain her humanity good who turned you then Head-cord ripped but wit theirs brought both good with the both with witnesses you Irina/others are guilty end her/others they then ATOMIZED! Then too late the cause of death then VAPORIZING! good ended them into as all of ashes more Volturi guards it happened Bella was not human at all anymore so they Alice who done to you/they they killed her but she returns different so they Alice her powers went beyond life and Death with they with three each three oh my god she wants revenge onto them gasp a goddess of war id trapped Bellona you can do it.
Snowing 12d chapter 13 . 4/1
When is the next chapter
wild artemis chapter 13 . 3/10
I hope u up date this soon, I'm really getting into this story.
andrewpine chapter 1 . 3/4
How about finishing this story please.
BiBuggles chapter 13 . 2/14
I am super intrigued by this story. I hope all in tour life is going well and at some time you continue this great story.
jackyfloresq2001 chapter 13 . 12/27/2019
can't wait for the next chapter in this story
Debbie Hicks chapter 13 . 10/22/2019
14. Fighter
From a anime began to say the words held her ward had bangs longer hair began flying began to chant into Japanese was too foreign You'r Sushi Rin Jin Shi Chi Rypu Pryu Zai Kai Chou Bai Chi Shi Zhou Shi Chi Bai Shi Chi Tou Zai Kai BAI ZEN! glowing a planetary symbol advancing her powers Shinto white-red robes I CALL THE POWERS OF BETAZED GREAT FIREBALLS CHARGE! Wearing the bodysuit from NASA gracefully more elegantly Flying from here then flaring but burning but scorching Fire flashing acted like Vampire Princess Miyu her powers was evolving beyond her abilities but it came too late caused her eye color to turn a unholy golden brown was in fact fiery yellow/black Alice she dropped her blood from a elk suddenly awakened Fear the Guardian who seal Shimna land of yomi Miyu then it was too late herself had a new life from here Alice there is a prophecy she is a royal Vampire princess is the watcher and guardian beware of her planetary symbol she just adapted have drank it a side finally Emerged it made her a lot much powerful but very strong is a Shimna then too late were as all of animal blood in ice Caused her to release her powers is not human looks like a teenaged girl the newspapers of her Awakening powers caused her to be frozen into ice of it the more blood as with alien venom powering up down here psssst a rabbit Bells you just ate animal blood are different you must learn of your heritage bitten your best friends are your servants Alice I am not normal with both bitten but Caused them to have powers are rare but from Shimna blood then too late the newspaper of it her teeth/canines were toxic waste were poisonous it came too late with others had stopped aging but are Immortal.
agirl00z chapter 13 . 9/18/2019
It's been a while, I didn't expect any more chapters. I glad I was wrong. This Bella needs some good in her life. Great couple of chapters.
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 1 . 9/11/2019
Lost all interest when Irina gets random ability.
Jet chapter 13 . 9/9/2019
Nice you’re back.
andrewpine chapter 13 . 9/11/2019
She didn't kill him she was defending herself from being killed.

Looking forward to the rest of this story,soon.
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