This is great! I've spent most of the last few days re-reading the novel and then I watched the movie and this was exactly what I needed next!

Firstly it is of obligatory importance that I point out the nice nod to Han and Leia when Venkat’s calls out Commander Lewis on Beck and Johassen’s relationship. It was a nice touch! The nerd in me cheered when Beck said, “I know” .
If you ask me your three chapters seemed almost like an appendix attached to the book because the style and content almost perfectly mimics the book. It makes the story seem like a seamless part of the original. Good work. Thanks.

I don't understand why there are so many reviews. The story is fantastic! It's realistic, good written and give us a glimpse on relationship of Beth and Chris. I love it! thanks for your work)

This was fantastic and realistic. I hope you'll write more for The Martian soon.

Excellent writing so far.

Once the story gets to the time Mark is pulled back on board, he'll be a huge supporter of Chris and Beth (he did send that email to Beck after all).

I couldn't tell you about the physics-science, but the bio-science in this was SWEET. I am such a nerd and so in love with these two characters; this fic hit just the right line of romance and science and I think you nailed the characters. I did like the added drama of the course by the sun and the physiological differences. I absolutely didn't think about that, and it was a fun conjecture! Loved it.

Cool story I really enjoyed it. I also liked the fact that they were using each other as support.

This is super sweet and I think you nailed both Beth and Chris. I like that there is mostly just thoughts and feelings in this not explicit imaging of Chris slipping it in and what not.

I love this so much, and I'm so impressed with your research and dedication! Keep up the good work!