It's such a shame you decided to discontinue this, it really is a brilliant and intriguing piece of work; seamlessly written with fine pacing, excellent description and subtle plot-pointing, enough to make audiences question and adore.

You have a talent.

I am so confused.

Good story, but you shouldn't use things like "Aryan" or "polluting white flesh"... it sounds a little messed up...

Oh whoa. I really do hope you continue this because it's a wholly interesting concept! Very disturbing, though...Link not being the Hero we see him as, defending the likes of Ganondorf...

If Caesar has not come to steal our hearts, then what HAS he come to steal?

nice

I don't blame Zelda for looking away when ganondorf dresses... I wouldn't want to look at someone's green bootay either. It's like, a rotting buttocks. Or something.

that was...utterly disturbing.

Update. I like this. I want to read more...

I love it!

More, please :-)

WiseCrack

PLZ! Continue this fic. Your style is awsome. I can't wait to read later chaps.

I think your zelda fic is cool. Well, it's depressing mainly, but hey, I've always had high esteem for the fics with darker moods. They just seem more real. What the * happened to Link? And Zelda? Please write more chapters. I've read one similar story that went along the lines of "what if link didn't go and straight kill Ganon but he was Ganon's bitch and then he killed him out of hatred." It was slightly depressing and the way he coped was slightly unrealistic. How in the name of the goddesses did Link develope sympathy for Ganon? Is it Stockholm syndrome as Zelda was developing? But please write more soon.

Excellent peice of writing! Your style and detailed describtion are teriffic, not to mention your extensive use of various words. A dark, dramatic, and very mysterious it's confusing. Each sentence makes me want to read I'm flabergasted with the amount of 'Why' questions popping in my head: Why is Link side-by-side with G-dorf? Why can't Ganondorf see Zelda? Why did Zelda accept his so-called 'favor' rather than verbally assult Link to death?

You've got potentual dude! You must continue this ASAP! Ah the suspence!

What an interesting plot! Your graceful writing once again captures my interest. So many different portrayals of Zelda, it was only time before you captured her as the classic maiden, but perhaps in a situation where she can not be saved. Looking forward to more!

Ugh. This is an extremely well-composed fanfic, with a good level of darkness and tragedy. . . . But, unfortunately, I fear it's not my style of story. I commend you for making this; I'm entirely supportive of you continuing; I just don't think I'll be reading the next chapter. It's not you, though, and I can't say that enough. Your story is fantastic. It's just not my kind of story. So, by all means, without or without me as an audience, please continue.

Aw, that's . . . that's . . . um, I agree with Zelda. Obscene and disgusting. Well-written fic, could still be very good, just . . . Defiled Link! Ah! I'm a little confused at this point, but I won't argue completely. Not yet. There's a third chapter yet, so I'll read that before I either condemn this story or praise it.

(Note: on the chance that I condemn it, let it not be because of your writing style; but the subject matter may not be something I agree with. Your style is beautiful, I assure you.)