Naruto and Kuramas inner monologue has me dying

Sakura est vraiment une grosse radine. Si Sasuke n'avait pas insisté ce jour la. Elle aurait laisser Naruto mourrir de faim. Elle ne sert vraiment a rien cette fille.
Je me demande toujours pourquoi kishimoto a tuer Neji au lieu d'elle. Je deteste Sakura. haha

Pauvre Naruto il a été refroidi par le chidori XD

oui enfin.. il accepte ses sentiments pour Sasuke .. Kurama est vraiment un gros pervers dans cette histoire. C'est trop marrant. A mon avis le quatrième Hokage ne savait pas que qu'il allait mettrd un renard pervers dans le ventre de son fils.

Would you mind if I borrow this idea about jinchuuriki and mating for my own fic?

:) I love Narusasu!

Wow great story.

I am in love with this fanfic!

a fem Sasuke and fem itachi x Naruto would be great. just suggestion. keep up the great work.

I read through the story, because I usually like your stories. I have to admit, though, that I was not very enthused about this story :-/

I wasn't a fan of Sasuke being submissive. It's just too counter to his personality. And I didn't like the changes to Naruto's character either...

I definitely still enjoy your writing style and I like many of the stories you write. This one just didn't get me.

Ehhhhhhhh...

Sasuke as a submissive... Ehhhhhhh... Nah, can't see it. He's too dominant and too obsessed with maintaining a certain level of control. Naruto, on the other hand, is far more flexible. And definitely not afraid of his feminine side, as we can see by his usage of the sexy no jutsu.

Very reasonable solution. It also eliminates a lot of the angst and misunderstandings. I like how you always find credible ways to give characters necessary information before they do anything they can't take back-as they do in the series.

fantastic story ~ I really enjoyed reading it! .

I'm confused, shouldn't all the village Kages have been at the Sound village inauguration.. like Tsunade, the Leaf Hokage?

I'm confused about the information regarding Gaara since when they confronted Danzo it stated that his extraction, death and revival had already happened but now it mentioned that it's about to happen so how can it be both?