I loved and I am wondering If would have a continuation about Toya and Yue.
I liked how you put your point of view!

very good! I loved the flowers thing!

cool, my otp is toyaxyuki so this was cool to read

I loved the flowers and how you descrived the magic as wind, it was great!

Beautifully done. I loved the fact that you did match the manga perfectly. I love the part where Yue finally reveals himself to Toya. That's one of my favorite parts in the story. I love how you told it from Yue's pov. I especially love how you matched the flowers for their meanings. I really love symbolism like that.

Cool