So when are you going to update? I've been waiting forever. I miss you! What have you been up to? Update soon please?

Oh my fucking god...

this is amazing! you have to update as soon as you can! please!

Oh! A Dreamer update? Dost mine eyes decieve me? Hehe. *gets to reading eagerly*

Uncanny ability to insert her foot into her mouth...~nice~ XD

Aw...*cheesy grin* Oh Ferocious. hehe. Too, too adorable.

HAHA! Even better...the threat of no bacon. Oh the horror. No, really. M...bacon. hehe.*cough* Sorry. lol. ANYWHO...

Ah, the whole tongue-tied, nervousness around guys...I know it well. *snark* ;D

Ah, the sweetness that is Mush. *sigh* ;D

Haha! Nice warning to him on her part.

O_O Oh! Repressed memories coming to the fore and realizing you are what you hate. Oh...very nice. *nods*

Oh, excellent ending to the chappy; way to leave us hanging and wanting more. ;D

Hope to see more of this soon, it has been far too long, m'dear. Good to see you again, as it were. Hehe.

Til next time! XD XD

I read your whole story and it was so GOOD! i loved it...it actually made me cry when I heard her father died lol thats how into it I was...haha...anyway update soon!

though it's been a very long time, i still LOVE this story! Just...update sooner this time, okay? loves and it's fabulous and i can't wait to see what happens.

::Jumps and claps for joy::

what a wonderful way to start a Sunday... and yes, I should be working, but the laptop just froze... losing 30 minutes worth of work. I needed a break.

Speaking of breaks... yay for summer vacation and updates and extra time.

as always, my friend, you remind me how talented you are. :)

Great story! At first, I was a little put off, I don't usually read stories with OCs, especially girls because they usually turn into Mary Sues, but Ravenna is actually an interesting character! What would the opposite of a Mary Sue be, a Sue Mary? Anyway, that's what she is. I liked how she never actually hated the newsies, just what they reminded her of, and how even though we hated her when she was around the newsies, we loved her when she was chatting with Elena. And the prejudice thing was interesting for me to, although I guess I'm biased - my anscestors were Bohemian gypsies and this is the first story with prejudice that I could relate to. I've read many stories dealing with homosexuality, racism, or religion, but this is the first time I've been able to really connect with it. I love this story and where it's going (I don't usually like romance, but this is actually realistic), and I'm dying to know what happens next!

An update on this, and I missed it...*sighs and hangs head in shame, begging forgiveness...* ;D

Oh no! Mush having a relapse! Eep. Not good.

Oh...'it was a Ravenna size hiding spot' I ~LIKE~ that phrasing there! *cheesy grin* Love it...but, Mush's fevered rantings don't sound too good. *bites lip and reads on*

M...such a lovely interaction as the day begins. M...tho of course yesterday's events should not be forgotten and left unresolved. ;)

Haha! Love his response to her! "You do seem to be tripping all over yourself today.." Hehe...very nice.

Mush the bookworm, eh? Hm...*ponders* Eh...yet another most adorable incarnation of the boy. ;D

Aw...poor Rav, but I got news for ya honey...~EVERYthing's~ complicated. *sigh*

M...another nice chapter here with a bit of intrigue, and lots of aww moments, wheter of the sweet kind or the sad for them kind. XD

Eh...I'll forgive the lateness of the chappy, if you'll forgive the lateness of the review. Deal? Haha! It has been too long. Hope all is going well for you! And see you next chapter! ;D

YAY! You UPDATED!

(Although I do recall a certain promise that this would be up for my birthday... which was several months and an entire summer ago... :) Love ya girl!)

So, yeah. As always, loved the chapter. Especially since Pride and Prejudice made an appearance, the BEST Jane Austin book (which says quite a lot coming from me).

But, because of the fall, humans are never completely satisfied, and thus, I want ANOTHER chapter... A Christmas present? Preferably a chapter that has my Newsie story dream of the heroine NOT falling madly in love with Spot Collins, but rather disliking him... maybe?

Just wanted to tell you again: You rock chica-deeka!

Ooh ooh ooh ooh! I know, I know! *waves hand madly in air* Bedknobs and Broomsticks. *grins madly*

Wow. That was really good. I'm kinda tryin' to figure out everything still, but I think I've got it. I don't want to share anything, but I think I'm finally understanding most things. I'm so happy you updated though! It really did bring a smile to my face! This is a great story, and you're doing an awesome job. Keep it up! Can't wait to read more! yay! Mush love, peace out

-MegabeeAthlete

Aww, that was such a good chapter! I understood a few Romani words too! lol. I think Mush is PMSing... lol. Well, I'm tired... and I need to sleep... I went to bed at like five and woke up at nine this morning. AH! That's about four hours of sleep. Kill me... lol. Keep up the kickin' work!

*~RaiN~*

Great job! I just started reading your story, and I'm really liking it! I especially like how you're taking your time for Mush and Ravenna to get together. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Once again, great job, and please, keep up the great work!

Late, but finally your review, m'dear. XD
Uh oh! Danger, Ravenna! hehe. Trecherous, trecherous hand. *evil grin*
Haha! God, that sounds like something that'd happen to me! haha!
YAY! The "Cute you to I'm not!" Haha! As you can see that still cracks me up! ;D
Ooh...very nice rational and pointed discussion b/w Rav and Elena. *nods*
Hehe...mr. snuggles. XD
Wow...enter Spot...does he know she's hanging with the 'hattan newsies? He seems to recognize her with his comments to her...Lucy, you got some 'splainin ta do! Ok, that really intrigues me.
And Jack's reaction...oh yeah, mucholy intrigued.
Ok...wow...nice, nice ending. Questions, questions and more questions that I MUST have answered, I tell you! Hehe.
You're an August baby? O_O Me, too! Only I'm more at the end of the month, but...haha!
Ok, well...dare I say
MORE! Hehe. Can't wait. XD

YAY! good good me like! but wut is with jack... hmm... anyway, more more more soon! pelase!