Thats neat how you were able to go back on how they came to choose their job path and i think you should take more freedom in how they fight rqther than restricting it to how the game exactlydescribes it. O feel it can be a lot more fun in using creative liberty in altering how abilities like meteor or mega slash work

I really like how the story is similar to the game but with a twist. Hope that you could keep writing story like this.

It's great, keep updating!