Cute!

Beautiful. This fic is exactly what I would call short but sweet, and you managed to describe so much in so little! This could have been a full length story, but I definitely prefer it this way, especially as your writing style is perfect here. The plot is great, and it was clear and to the point, with no unnecessary scenes added in. In short, this oneshot was amazing.

Hey!
Rather interesting story!
Great work!

Alicia :)

I loved this! It's brilliant :)