Very satisfying review, brought peace to me. I've been searching for a good alternate ending for ages. I would have worked on details a little more, but it was pretty good.

Wh-What? no Epilogue!? GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! [Purposely activating every Nuke in the entire world out of frustration and the result being: An area of the world had been forever changed into a very, Very large crater the size of Russia now filled with large portions of Nuclear toxic wastes.]

[Funny as well that all of the Nukes have landed straight into Russia. Destroying the Entire country and it's people in the process...]
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Whoops...Meh~ who cares- I mean: Oh Noooooo!~

so rip her wedding lol

i really like this story i always wanted that takaki and akari end up together even if its a dream i think so that is the end i want thank for ending this story with happy ending

taki-kun? its takaki,bro. don't rip-off kimi no na wa

you did good man you did good i never watched the movie but i just didnt want a sad ending you made it happy for me thanks

I like the story, it's a nice ending, however I do have a few gripes.

One, there could've been more use of diction/"deeper phrases", their words and phrases seem very simple, without leaving much to think about. There is little describing of scenes and imagery, and I feel that things could've been more refined.

Second of all, things feel a tad bit rushed. Slow down the pacing a bit and i'd say it would be pretty good.

Lastly, I found the characters to be a little OOC, especially Akari. Try getting a better grasp of the characters, and how they'd react to situations like these.

Don't think i'm trying to discourage you, again I liked this story. Instead, try to improve using the criticism i've given to you.

Hah Itomori! From Kimi no na wa?