I can’t wait to read more!

I found you off Less Wrong’s Favorites list.

There is nothing worse than slogging your way through bad story after poorly written story, to finally find a story you are really interested in, only for that story to be so incomplete as to barely be considered past the introduction phase.

I would dearly like to read this story is what I'm trying to say.

This is the perfect Naruto. Honestly, just perfect - and makes sense. It was an enjoyable read.

Why, exactly, have you given Hinata Sakura's shtick?

This fic is really great. Naruto's interactions with Kyu are extremely interesting. Kakashi and Hiruzen's, too. And Kakashi and Hiashi's. And I love that you gave Sakura's double personality to Hinata.

I hope you have plans to continue this story, it would be a crime to leave it unfinished.

Fun story to read, I'm looking forward to more!

Great job so far, love this story, hope you keep up the great work!

Well any piece of fiction that you enjoy and learn from is good, so here have some positive reinforcement and I hope make more and have fun doing so

A great story, too bad it's discontinued

This is excellent. Not quite as good as Color Psychology, due to the "voices in the head" thing, but still possessing of amusing social politicking. You are really quite good at getting into character's heads, and doing the meta-meta-meta-level analysis thing. This fic (and Color Psych) are both well-deserving of being put in the same category of rationalist fics like HPMoR.

Thank you for sharing this story with us! I just read chapters 1-4 and thoroughly enjoyed them. I think you have a great premise and think you are doing a great job with the characterization of the Kyuubi. Chapter 4's interaction between Naruto and Hinata was priceless and you've taken a very interesting and novel approach to Hiashi that I applaud. Thanks again, and I look forward to reading further.

This looks very interesting

Glad to see that their first idea failed. Much more realistic and suggests good things about the future of the story.

Ah, I was wondering if this was going to be a rationality story. If your Kurama is talking about bystander effect, it seems like maybe you'll be getting some science in here. Cool.

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An adult telling a girl that she needs to let someone else grope her is dancing pretty close to the line of squick, especially when done by someone with this degree of power imbalance. It's saved from crossing the line solely because she actually would like that to happen. I hope you don't do too much of this in the future, though.