It's a real shame what's happening right now. You're stories are some of the most well written ones I have ever read, the characters are fleshed out and it has a stable background. Therefore, I am asking to adopt Soldiers of the Republic and your Halo story if it is okay with you. I will have to ask for help every now and then. I am still developing as a writer, but I think that with your assistance, I can improve.

Loving this story so far. I've always imagined what it would be like if the Clone wars involved non clone soldier and droids. Love it. Also for the uniforms for the separatist biological soldiers, are they like the uniforms of Cadian shock troopers but dark blue instead of green?

I got some real Band of Brothers vibes from this chapter.

Ignoring the complete disregard for the original continuity, which is completely fine by the way, there’s no dynamic conflict in this story so far. It’s unique and you’re not a bad writer, you just need to slow down a proof read sometimes but the actual conflict is so boring. There’s never any surprise or danger to the good guys. The admiral predicts the seppies will do this and boom the seppies do exactly that every time. And then you fleet engagements of like 800 ships kicking the hell out of each other and the RVC only take like 10 casualties? That’s a bit laughable. I know the Seppies main ship of the line wasn’t exactly a beast but the Recusants and Providences could easily match their counterparts and the Seppie battleships are power houses in their own right. The Mandator 2 while being ugly as sin is a very powerful ship but that wouldn’t stop the RVC’s fleet from taking casualties especially in that mothball of a fight in this chapter. The Imperator 2s. Like what the hell. The only imperial style ship that saw combat during the clone wars was the Victory 1 and while I have no problem with you diverging from the original those ships are simply far to powerful for that time period. For god sakes they could sit there and soak up an entire volley from a Sep Battleship, be completely fine, and then throw back an even bigger volley. There’s no struggle and the combat is just plain boring. I hope moving forward that this changes.

I really like this story. Can't wait to see if it changes anything about the end of the war and make it different from canon.

very good new chapter, I hope soon the separatist surrender to the RVC.

Something tells me that the dialogue was partially inspired by band of brothers.

The description of the foxholes reminded me of the battle of the bulge episodes in band of brothers.

I'm glad there is a new chapter im just sad that Nightshade didn't make much of a appearance. He is my favorite character so far.

Finally.

Nice update:)

Is my OC in the story

I really love this story so far. I consider myself a military historian and i was wondering if you based the idea of all the troops in one unit coming from one planet on the ‘Pals Battalions’ formed by the British Army during WWI?

i love that part you took from the Band of Brothers. Best miniseries of all time

I really liked this chapter. The combination of space and ground combat, the cultures of different planets and beings fit really well together.

While I really enjoy this story I also enjoy numerous others you wrote, brutal reality and truth as well as ghosts specters being chief among them.

If you could and if it doesn't strain you to bad could you write a new chapter for ghost specters especially cause rebels is about to end, I would really enjoy it.

Are the clones going to betray their Jedi general's or something like and do the guards join the Empire or the rebels