Massive lack of foresight and planning has turned this fic into an absolute clusterfuck, thus you giving up. Fool.

A thought struck me, couldn't Shirou just use Rule Breakeaker to sever his link with his master..?

Really fucking retarded

I find it entirely unrealistic that Saber should feel like this about killing criminals, she herself has killed countless men in her life. Also I don't think Shirou would ever be act so submissively unless there is mind control going on. He is quite mellow usually, but not when it comes to villains. Which Ultear clearly is.

Whelp. Say goodbye to Stella.

But damn I found this story again and reread it. Man do I love what you're doing here with having Shirou be in Grimoire Heart. I'm looking forward to his eventual reunion with Arturia!

This is a very good fanfic.. i hope u continue it..

Se ve muy interesante, espero que puedas actualizar pronto

interesting fic...
shirou and arturia meeting-is something i very much look forward to.
wonder what she will make of him now, will he save his new master?

And is the scourge of got 'Attila?

Interesting story and certainly never dine befire ! Looling forward to see the continuation especially on how they will reunite and if everyone except Arthyria realise Shirou is there and also if he could at time protect and assist her and not to mention he is under the grasp of a women who can do whatever she wants with him and force him to at time do things that goes again the ideal she know of him . On another note be interesting to see if modred start to get attach to Shirou as a surroganate fathe or brother figure due to her lack of proper caring figure n perhaps more in the future ! Anyways hope all is well with you good author and hope to read more of it in the future !

cool

No, no, no, why Donald good stories end at good parts and why are they all unfinished

I am glad you decided to go through such an original route but I did notice a lack of elements from the fairy tail universe in the last couple of chapters. I am not the biggest fan of how subservient Shirou is, though you do admittedly have a solid explanation for it. Also, I like the heroes you decided to include, should make things interesting.

Really interesting start though saber's outfit made me pause for a bit. Just can't imagine her running around with a crown despite having no kingdom

you should totally give shirou a harem, the poor guy deserves one, hopefully it will include nero, arturia and attila and maybe ultear and erza

As always, being Shirou is suffering.

I want more