Oh, I just love it that Duo knew that Heero was watching him! That part just made me laugh; oh god, what a good little twist, and what a good story!

I liked it.

dabs at a tear with a chibi. "I like this one. write more good stories, okay?"

wanders off to bawl in a corner, clutching a duo-chi like a lifeline, and using it like a tissue.

VERY GOOD STORY... i was very intrigued all the way through... you write very well, i felt bad for heero though but it all worked out in the end

and yea their home life was great... yea i am gonna leave you alone now...

;-; I loved this to bits, you know. From the insecurity to the laundry to the reason Duo went out every night. ;-; L.o.v.e.d. *happy sigh*

hey that was a good one. very good discription of heeros feelings and the length was just right. keep up the good writing.