Reviews for Naruto's first Heat |
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Entercreativenam chapter 1 . 8/1 Cool one shot just one note kurama's chakra is corrosive so kiba would be dead. |
Krista Lennon chapter 1 . 5/8 Lol, imagine if it were real... hahhaha *died of uncontrollable laughter* |
Kitsune chapter 1 . 11/7/2018 If you are having gay sex like this, I feel really sorry for you because it would be agonising. |
FUCKYOUASSHOLE chapter 1 . 10/9/2016 This was totally hot! I love KibaNaru. Thanks for writing this. I really enjoyed reading it. ( 。・_・。)人(。・_・。 ) ( F ) ( i ) ( r ) ( e ) ( b ) ( a ) ( l ) ( l ) - ( F ) ( u ) ( c ) ( h ) ( s ) ( i ) ( a ) |
sirius1696 chapter 1 . 9/30/2016 My Favorite KibaNaru from you yet. Very hot, very enjoyable, loved it. |
ShikamaruNaraKibaNaruChunin chapter 1 . 9/13/2016 Hell ya anything you right would be fine with me - best in show lol. This is one of the funnest ones I ve seen, keep up the smmut and have fun writing |
lagseeing1123 chapter 1 . 9/12/2016 Great job. A little short for a one-shot lemon than what I usually write. You went straight to trashing Naruto instead of feeling feverish first and taking a rest. Writing that part could have developed the story more. But then again it's a PWP so the lemon is what we're after. 11 inches huh? That's scary. |
davycrockett100 chapter 1 . 9/12/2016 sweet |