This was a fun sexual tale alright and I'm fine with the ending. It leaves room for it you want to revisit it as well as makes things very fun for theories that will take place. So again thank you for the fun!

Great story! Hope to read more of your stuff soon!

Also, always nice to see an author encourage others to write other stories!

Best of luck to your book too!

I'm a bit confused by what Death did to allow himself be punished to be honest...but other then that good story.

8 please the return of the " real owners" of earth and a war against them

Awesome

Yep, Flint is definitely dying next chapter. Shoko will have to make a move to save the Flame King whether she's ready or not, but I think at this point she is well prepared to take back the Fire Kingdom in Phoebe's name. Finn once again shows us that he takes lip from nobody, and I wonder what Suadela is brewing up in the background in her pursuit of the eradication of all life on earth. Let's hope Maja doesn't flake out on our hero at a critical time or things might go belly up for the large family.

Got real emotional through so key points in this fic. But I really want to see how things will shape up...

There sure were a lot of feelings being flung around this chapter. Lust, hate, greed, love, regret, sadness, hope, despair, longing. With so many women at his side, it's a miracle that Finn hasn't been driven crazy by the constant fluctuation of emotions surrounding him as things get worse, though Cherry and Drew have been doing a pretty good job keeping their sister-wives in check so as not to run him too ragged. Seems like Billy is falling back into that dark pit that formed in his mind after J.J's death, but luckily for him he has a loving wife and kids to pull him up from the brink this time around. Flint is going to make his move soon, I'm sure, and I wonder if Finn will be able to get his army supplied and beefed up enough to take on the two pronged attack that will likely happen once the fire people start their march toward the candy capital, since Blargetha will no doubt use the chance to press her tanks forward.

Maja isn't going to be herself when she wakes up man that sucks. And it looks like Ingrid is in some deep trouble and things are going to get very intense...

!PLEASE! tell me there will be a new one!?, humans earth vs the creatures of OOO

Damn epicness is real

Yes! Another epic fight!

I'll be sad to see this story end...

Any plans on what to do next?

It was epic and sexy oh man I loved every bit of it. Sad that Maja has some deep sexual issues but on boy are things shaping well for a big finally!

it was, thank you.

I've read your stories and I love every part of it!

Sad I didn't get to read your early ones sooner.