Reviews for Forty Glimpses
J Shute chapter 52 . 5h
Yikes. Sympathies for the technical issue there...

As for the fic, it seems this is getting big. Thank god the bad guys are, shall we say, competently challenged. It may have been an exploding sheep in 1, but a whole mix attacked elsewhere. Thankfully those shooters are dealt with though, they had it coming.

And yay! Impromptu proposal.

Good chapter and nice job.

Well done.
Jessica chapter 51 . 8/10
Holy shit, I was scared for a second. I thought maybe one or more of the gang had gotten killed in the blast. Thankfully they're all alive. I can't wait for the next part!
J Shute chapter 51 . 8/3
Oh snap.

Well, after that heckuva cliffhanger, we're like Judy was at the start here. Dazed and feeling a lot calmer than we should have given what just happenned.

Still...

This was a solid breather chapter, I have my fingers crossed for poor Cooper, and boy will this event ratchet everything up a notch. I'm curious to see what will happen next and where they're being taken.

Good chapter!
warnerplanet chapter 51 . 8/2
excelente capitulo
warnerplanet chapter 8 . 7/27
esta historia le puedes hacer continuacion?
Victor John Foxfire chapter 50 . 7/27
Damn that Mamífero. His Political Fear Mongering has lead to a Suicide Bomber trying to Kill Judy and Nick.

Then again, a Hack like Mamífero managed to get a legit press pass, and turned up the exact same day that Judy and Nick needed a Protective Escort, like someone KNEW that the Escorts would move to protect their charge. And the Suicide Bomber got the pass as well? Even though noone legal would give it to such a clearly insane individual?

What's the Betting a lot of the Media Vultures also got blown to bits? They clearly were in the Atrium when the Bomb went off, and the text didn't mention if they bailed.

Hopefully the "Protestors" got maimed by the backblast of the Suicide Bomber's attack as well. Their fault for blindly believing a Known Media Fearmongerer.
Jessica chapter 50 . 7/26
Oh come on! You can't leave us on a cliffhanger like this!
J Shute chapter 50 . 7/26
Holy moly!

Everything is spiralling out of control here. Great job with Judy explaining herself to the Chief, and some interesting takes on what Pangea might be. Following up on the call too would be good...

And then we had a surprise riot! And a surprise bomb too! Holy crap in a handbasket was the tension thick at the end there! Amazing job, I am getting more and more hooked by the chapter! Great job!
Jessica chapter 49 . 7/23
Ooh, so much suspense! I can't wait to see what'll happen next.
J Shute chapter 49 . 7/18
Well, something's happening to Simone. Yikes, there are mammals in high places who want this shut down. Thank god Judy was so quick on her feet and good with her ears..

And I guess we now know who the guarding will be for. Good chapter!
Robert Escher chapter 49 . 7/18
Wow... Well... I mean, she'll be safe until whomever from this Pangea group is that has infiltrated the ZPD gets a hold of her... but then, we've got the Dynamic Duo on the case so...

Starting to get good... gonna have to buy more popcorn!
Guest chapter 49 . 7/18
Wow! This is one hell of a story. I'm so invested in this. Great job.
warnerplanet chapter 49 . 7/18
excelente capitulo
Wrong Password chapter 48 . 7/12
This was definitely a painful-in-the-best-way chapter to read. As much as Bellwether was an awful mammal, she didn't deserve that end...

You have me waiting for the next chapter, Crow; congrats on another brilliant one! I remember reading these when they were just snippets and hoping that you'd expand on them- every chapter's been better than the last!
The Prime Writer chapter 48 . 7/12
This "Guarding" arc looks like it'll become a story all on its own, more so then Sheriff and Analysis ever were if the current number of chapters is any indication. It's nice to see Sergeant Winters make his return in all his hard-assed glory, and I'm thinking that he and Juby will become honest-to-god friends by the end of this whole thing. I'm genuinely curious as to what'll happen to Judy's parents or how they handle this whole thing; with Judy's life being in danger and her and Nick under constant watch, they're almost certainly going to be scared as hell, and I can't see anything told to them by either Judy or the officers calming them down. Nick seems to be taking the situation a lot better then his girlfriend, but it could just be his mantra of "never let them see that they get to you" we see. Having a chapter seen from his POV would be a nice change of pace, see what his actual opinions of this whole situation are.

Having an entire chapter devoted to seeing what happened to Bellwether is a novel choice, but you won't see me complaining about it. It was nice to see what happened to her after her arrest, and also nice to see that she does regret what she did and wants to atone in some way. And we got an interesting new character in the form of Simone; who was put in prison on trumped up charges and denied any chance of getting out. I'm hoping that she'll be released and her crimes declared acts of self-defense sometime during this story, and that Bellwether will at least unofficially recognized for her part in trying to help Judy.

Well, that's all I have to say for now. Thank you for creating such an interesting story, and I hope that you remain in good health through the rest of these trying times.

Sincerely, The Prime Writer.
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