Reviews for The Control Freak, the Narcissist, and the Liar |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is intense. It did come through in your writing that Mikey’s observant... I thought I was being clever when I wondered how much he was not catching about Leo, but it seems that was very much deliberately written that way, nicely done. Poor Leo. Poor everyone. |
![]() ![]() ![]() pplllss continue! this story was simply amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() would love if you finished this its an amazing story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story so far, I eel so sorry for Mikey so I hope things work out with his brothers soon, especially Leo because I love the brotherly fluff between them but the drama is so intriguing and compelling :) please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Actually great fic in general! I love the emotion displayed by everyone and I'm a sucker for Mikey angst lol and protective brothers are a plus! Once again, great job! Can't wait for the next fic! |
![]() ![]() Oooooooooooohhhhhh love love love love love love love love love love love love love love xxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. Ow. Leo, you asshole. But you know, this is inspiring. I have a hard time writing Leo. I also want to grab Mikey and cuddle him and give him a dose of my Klonopin. |
![]() ![]() Keep going,INEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! Great story! |
![]() ![]() My heart is broken |
![]() ![]() ![]() God. This was really well written that I can practically feel the family falling apart right before my eyes. Keep up the awesome work! |
![]() ![]() This has been really good so are doing a great job!Keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() My babies. I understand. You are really good. Really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Mikey, poor everyone and can someone get Leo out of the Dojo, the guy needs a hobby and training isn't a hobby. Look forward into seeing more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes. Keep going. Delicious Mikey angst and Emotional turmoil! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh. I love the angst! Your doing a great job in keeping everyone is character. Can't wait for more c: |