I just got into this story I’m so happy you updated. Keep them coming and proud of the grammar. Don’t worry I’m not perfect myself. Anyway loving the update and look forward to the next chapter.

So at first it was very very very hard to read but I stuck to it because I’ve been looking for a fan fiction like this. About time villains had a love story. So throughout chapters I had to guess what your trying to say but now it’s a slight improvement. Please update soon it’s getting good. I’ll be waiting

writing sucks... No clue what I am trying to read.

hello, I love the idea you have for this story but the english is just to broken for me to read and make sense of. English is the only language I know, so I'm sorry if this sounds harsh but I can't understand even half of the plot, I can't even tell if it's a woman or man your talking about.

Those are peanuts?

The cards, the cards, the cards! Not so little an obsession of his?! He's been looking for years and hasn't found a single one!

As for Yaga, I almost feel sorry for him.

Rose finds a friend, or just an ally?

It is still too early to speculate, but there is now a sort of alliance, with Rose secretly starting to cooperate with Jafar.

It won't be easy for the poor girl, as you can be sure that in the next chapter we will have a little trip to a mysterious cave filled with treasures.

vseliakich all sorts of.

What is the book you are looking for?

Not a bad idea, can I look at it?

Be cautious of the vizier, Rose.

He had a more beautiful plumage than the others. If he were a man his clothes would be admired by the palace. They would be expensive and varied.

You know, it would be interesting to see that story in Czech, though, it doesn't seem to be here. I too am from Czech republic originally, but having lived in Britain for 12 years I know a fair lot of English. If I may, I would like to point out some slightly incorrect spelling. Whatever romance there may be, it is the idea that struck me as interesting, which is why I wish to see if pointing out a few mistakes from this chapter could help to make it a little better perhaps.

"The name resembled rosary, like that from the novels of Oscar Wilde."

"Tea pink flowers grew in the manor gardens, as delicate as the finest silk as well as brilliantly red roses with sharp thorns. They were beautiful, yet treacherous, like a ravine. Trust one too much and it would end badly."

(Because I had no idea what you mean by the other part of the sentence. Maybe if I were given it in Czech, I would... So instead I decided to shift this a little. Of course, you could just ignore that bit.)

"The flowers were beautiful, untouchable and treacherous; their scents - quite unfortunately - dangerously alluring."

"Yet who would have guessed that the things which would await her would come in epic proportions."

"Rose was rummaging through the closest. Behind the window meanwhile, the weather was far away from warm and sunny, with the landscape being barren and cold, covered in snow. Of course, like every year, the snow had been ploughed through by the machines paid for by the city. Not very cheaply either"

I had a little trouble understanding the words that came after 'window' so I... er... may have improvised a little. Feel free to take somethings away, add something from here... what you will and won't is up to you.

"Rose however, cared about what was going on outside about as much as she did about her date. (And quite enjoyed it.? That part I don't get.)"

Were you trying to imply that she couldn't care less, or that she did care, except not in a nice way? She went on a date? How, wasn't she recently cheated on by her boyfriend, who had been with a slut/whore/wench (Fuchtle)?

netypovala - hadn't guessed.

Osubka/Osoba: Person. (there's more but this'll do)

Who looked like a plump apple to her.

If looks could kill... (I don't get the other bit.)

Disobeying the vizer, especially someone like Jafar, wasn't worth it to anyone.

Rose would have been a her, would she not? She is a female. Her knees have no gender, but she does.

And you know, could you just post bits of this chapter anonymously in czech into the review section of this story? If you are willing to cooperate, I think I could do better with those. Trust me, I do understand Czech... well enough to translate a few things here and there.

Also:

"I always read a few words and then I check..." (That's what I thought it could be.)

Can slip off: Muze odpadnout,

Inflection Prizvuk. (Sorry, can't write in Czech as my keyboard is set to English.)

Also, there is google translate. Not always accurate but...

Omg so cool