Love it

Thank you for writing this lovely heart warming love story. I enjoyed it.

It was really good

This was a wonderful story so happy that Bella got happiness and her crazy ass parents were punished for what they did to her. Their actions was deplorable.

Glad that her "parents" got sentenced, but totally understand that she feels cheated on justice being served.

Congrats on getting your Permanent Residency card

What an awful, awful thing. Those words that her so-called Father said to her, should not be said to anyone. I hope that somehow he is taken care of & can never hurt her again

I saw your story on the TwiFanfictionRec's and read through it. What a sweet story! It seems you did it all without a beta and with only a few errors each chapter - so, good job! One suggestion...if you write a story that takes place in Seattle...and the characters are American...they would not use Australian terms, right? ;)

Congrats on your new citizenship!
Kat

good luck

A good story. You handled a sensitive topic very well.

Good story!

It was a beautiful fic with a happy ending (which I love) but I felt like there's something missing. I think it was way to quickly the development of the relationship between Edward and Bella. Maybe a few more moments with them will do. And also to know more about Bella's baby father because it just sounded like a random guy she slept with and then disappear. That sounds very unlike Bella. What's his name, where they in a relationship, how long they had been together. And what happened with her dad? But even with those details congratulations on your work.

Beautiful story

Congratulations on your new permanent residence status. Good luck in the future.

Time for her parents to pay.

Hope this works out.