| Reviews for The Journey |
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   Euronite chapter 13 . 1/2/2017 stunning, absolutely lovely work of art. |
| Swishy03 chapter 13 . 9/26/2016 Whoo hoo! Go Team! I hope Blanche gets better soon, and they can continue being their awesome selves! Nice job at keeping this story interesting and awesome! :) -Swishy03 |
| xElinielx chapter 13 . 9/26/2016 Oh my god, I can't put into words how much I love this story. I haven't commented earlier, I kinda regret it. But I must at leat tell you how much I love this story. I was so excited, checking my mail almos every hour, hoping that you'd updated! Keep writing stories this awesome! You're super-awesome, remember that, and never stop writng 3 |
| GreenDrkness chapter 13 . 9/25/2016 A beautiful ending to a wonderful story I love the speech it speaks wonderfully to each aspect Keep on the writes |
| Defender31415 chapter 13 . 9/25/2016 Wait... That's it? But how do they rescue Lugia and stop Team Rocket? Yo've just left a massive plot hole. The chapter is good, but this can't end here! |
| jaguarspot chapter 13 . 9/25/2016 This was a wonderful story, and I loved every moment of it. Thank you for sharing this with us! And this chapter really inspired me. Tomorrow I go out and try harder than ever to make Mystic proud! |
| Swishy03 chapter 13 . 9/25/2016 Yay! That definitely made my night. I loved the part of, 'Valor is our heart, Mystic our mind, and Instict is our spirit. Kinda shows how much they're different, but all three aspects are needed. Love it. Please keep posting! -Swishy03 |
| Defender31415 chapter 12 . 9/22/2016 Great job. I'm so glad Blanche is alive. And you've shown me a side of Spark I never knew existed. He's not such a goofball anymore. But... What happens now? |
| GreenDrkness chapter 12 . 9/21/2016 GG to you Harmony |
| Swishy03 chapter 12 . 9/21/2016 Yay! Yes! Whoo hoo! Blanche is alive! Go Valor! (that's not my team, but I'm still cheering, k?) Burn it down! I love this so much, thank you for updating it and not keeping us in suspense. I'd like to see what happens next, good job keeping this story alive and interesting and... Yay for only severely injured verses dead! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/21/2016 It's Swishy03 again, and my god you're killing me with suspense! I really want to know what happened to Blanche and Sparky and Candela! Cause I'm sure Blanche will be severely injured, or dead, Sparky should be safe, as he was flying, and Candela wasn't in the picture then. All speculation though. So please please PLEASE update again! Thanks, till next chapter! |
| Defender31415 chapter 11 . 9/21/2016 You just had to leave us in suspense for one more chapter. At least we now know that the rest of the Academy and some local trainers are coming as backup. Great job. |
| GreenDrkness chapter 11 . 9/20/2016 Welp this had a sweet note to it but ended in a bit of bitterness Keep on the writes |
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/20/2016 DID YOU JUST KILL BLANCHE?! OHMYGOD MY LIFE! What has this world come to? She better be simply severely injured rather than dead. Oh, I'm not logged in, but this is Swishy03. So, this story took a turn for the worst. I can't believe the ending, I really hope you post soon, so I can figure out what happened to my Team Leader! But good job, this is such an interesting story to read, I love it! |
| Anna-Rosinha chapter 10 . 9/19/2016 That's was cruel, you know, ended this way, now I will bite my nails until the next chapter... Blanche is the best! So brave and sweetie. Good job, very nice chapter... |
