Reviews for Harry Potter and the Veil of Death
OliviaPotter251620 chapter 1 . 5/21
I love this fanfiction it's so creative I JUST LOVE IT. I LOVE IT.
D.J. Scales chapter 23 . 5/16
Its so said that it has to end.
Love2read23 chapter 21 . 4/23
I don't get why there was a distinction made with Harry not really being from a different time but that he's really this Harry and just has memories from a future Harry. Lily and James show Harry the mirror as if proving he doesn't have the scars from the horcrux hunt. I never thought that 17 year old Harry's body came to the past, just his conscious or soul landed in his 15 year old body. Seeing the canon timeline play out did more to convince than that mirror thing.
I just want to point out that when Harry refers to his time travel he says he came from the past. There's a time when he literally things that he needs to forget his old past and focus on the present and future but he really means that he needs to forget that old future and focus on the new future. Why does he call it the past?
Love2read23 chapter 22 . 4/23
There's some grammar errors throughout. Mostly missing words where it's easy to figure out what should have been there but it's not.
Love2read23 chapter 23 . 4/23
Thank you so very much for writing this. It has been an immense poignant piece. I've cried and felt for Harry and his grief at watching his family grieve for him and it's actually helped me grieve a bit as my dad passed just a few weeks ago.
I love the ending. It was perfect.
Love2read23 chapter 18 . 4/22
Oh my gosh! This whole thing with Harry hiding from them has been immensely heartwrenching. It's well written and I feel like the whole thing is just an exercise and how to make it hurt the most but it's so good. I've definitely cried reading this fic.
Love2read23 chapter 15 . 4/22
I don't understand why Harry is being so cruel and baiting Sirius. Is he just testing Sirius' love for him? He must recognize Sirius' intense love and grief for him.
something-siriusly-wrong chapter 11 . 4/7
This is quickly becoming the best fiction I've ever read, even though it breaks my heart
something-siriusly-wrong chapter 6 . 4/7
Oh sweet merlin Harry, let them know you're back
something-siriusly-wrong chapter 3 . 4/7
I really hope he fins his way back, or the light are royally screwed
BillBrink chapter 23 . 3/6
Just an excellent story! I enjoyed every chapter and want to thank you for sharing it with us.
Red2Ruby chapter 13 . 2/18
Liking Severus reaction here.
Red2Ruby chapter 13 . 2/18
Best chapter!
J flood chapter 23 . 2/13
your pen name is an apt description of your writing skills if you haven't already you should seriously consider going professional I would definitely read your books
Rebel Goddess chapter 23 . 2/11
Well that was just ridiculously enjoyable. I think one of the things I liked best, other than the way you interlocked future and past, was I don't think I've ever read this twist on time travel before and it worked so well. I read this in a sitting and just wanted to tell you how much I liked it. Well done.
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