one. loved you story. two I love u more that u ended even if abruptly so as to not leave us hanging. three, I think it was great not sending beca to college with them, it was unpected. nice touch. also touche on the Jesse thing, total dbag move. gonna see what else u got now

Yeah well now would be a good time to have all that toilet paper

This comment is Said in aloys from horizon zero dawns sarcastic voice

I laughed so hard at the first sentence lollllll

Excellent story, could have used a slightly longer ending, but I still haven't actually published any of mine so... Lets say I understand writers block, and really understand that sometimes stories write themselves a certain way. Anyway, said excellent story.
2022

I’ve been reading this story over the last few days along with a few others, but this is the only one that I’ve felt I had to comment on. You have down such a great job with this fic, capturing the characters perfectly and building backstories that I can easily invest in. Your writing style is beautiful and I just want to say thank you so much for writing this, it’s kept me entertained and given me something to look forward to read in my spare time. Thanks awesome nerd

I think that was one of the beat things I have ever read. Come home from school and read, also partially wish you had a soulmate, I really enjoyed this fanfic. I like the way you built up the relationship then made us, or just me, cry when Chloe nearly died and when you showed us Beca granting her wish. Personally, I think you should have made Becas wish happen aswell but you are definitely me favourite writer. 10/10

600th review. Well deserved.

Beautiful Harry Potter reference

Great story I hope to be able to read more of your stuff.

Wow. I think I have like a beer bottle of tears on this whole story. Amazing stuff! Thank you for sharing this story with us!

This is soooo good! I'm glad you finished it ;)

This was unbelievable.

OH. MY. FUCKING. GOD.

THAT. WAS STUNNINGLY BEAUTIFUL.

Just, GAH. I started following this story a while ago but it wasn't finished yet. So I waited a bit and kind of forgot about it, like I do with most things when I don't consistently do them lol. I regret not following along with the updates but I also don't because I legit just binge read this and like I said, oh my fucking god.

I honestly did not expect to cry in those last few chapters but I did. I wept like a baby dude. Not cool. All of this was just so well written, everyone was so perfectly in character, and you did great justice to the difficult topics that you had in this fic. I've been reading your stuff for a while now (here and your one shots on tumblr) and let me just say my dude, you are one talented writer. You are definitely one of my favourite fanfic authors dude. 3

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for taking the time to write these phenomenal bechloe stories for us!

I could probably go on for a lot longer but I'm gunna end this here so I don't write a novel of a review (even though you deserve one)

Lots of love! 3 3

I understand life getting in the way of writing, I have a fic that’s just half written and I have no motivation to continue. But I wanted to say thank you for writing this. I don’t feel like people give justice to what an ED actually feels like and the true struggle a person goes through. Having an accurate representation of my own life in a story about two of my favorite characters ever really means a lot. So thank you for dedicating so much of your life to this story and for sharing it with us. I really appreciate it.

I was going to bed about 11 chapters ago. Got sucked in big time. Great detail. Great length. Thanks heaps for sharing