Reviews for Non Lupus Emarcuit
Uchiha-no-Hime chapter 20 . 6/19
Is it wrong that I want Jacob to have printed on Miri but still go with Edward?
It's just ... damn it, I know Edward is not perfect but nobody is and he deserves Miri
So why do you better venture out and create the first polyamorous twilight story and have Miri finish both of them
well everyone happy
Arianna Le Fay chapter 20 . 6/18
with jake honestly i think you are making miri into bella ...
stop with whole edward drama ... you said , miri said it was over
Guest chapter 20 . 6/18
Oh please dont let her go to Italy!
She absolutely needs to stay with Jacob. 100% Jacob.

Edward can stay away, I love miri and Jacob too much haha!
CryingRosex3 chapter 20 . 6/18
No Edward.
More Jake
Vera chapter 20 . 6/18
Nope Jake 10000000000% please and thank you! But what happens when he imprints?
Guest chapter 19 . 6/17
I love this story so much! Miri is so awesome and I love her and Jacob together!
I cant wait to see what you're going to do with the original storyline. Its been amazing so far!

Also definitely team jacob here. I love how your developing their relationship and hope he actually did imprint on her!

Amazing chapter, thank you!
Arianna Le Fay chapter 19 . 6/17
uhh i hope she doesnt go to volterra ...
Arianna Le Fay chapter 18 . 6/17
mirri should be jacob imprint and end up with just jacob
after all mirri is not bella so she should not repeat bella mistakes of getting back with edward
CryingRosex3 chapter 18 . 6/15
Have him imprint of Miri or not at all, cause fuck that noise. And fuck Edward loool
Arianna Le Fay chapter 17 . 6/15
well i am glad she knows and accepted jake and all
but i am still hoping she is jake imprint ... edward doesnt deserve her
Guest chapter 17 . 6/15
Aw I'm so glad she figured it out!
I loved her basically just focusing on if Jacob wants to be her boyfriend or not haha!

Still very firmly team Jacob. With every chapter, I just love them more and more together!

I think someday her and Jake having kids would be super cute!
If we wanna be super corny, a little boy called William Charles haha! (For billy and Charlie!)
And if it's a girl, its gotta be Luna. That would kinda be hilarious.

So once again, please please please Jacob!
Uchiha-no-Hime chapter 17 . 6/14
I adore Miri with Jacob
But I love her with Edward
so ... why don't you keep both of them? hahahah he throws a Tessa Gray and gets the two boys
And I think if I should have kids, maybe she would do better than Bella did.
CryingRosex3 chapter 17 . 6/14
Jacob Jacob jacob
CryingRosex3 chapter 16 . 6/13
Please, let her stay with Jake. Edward is such a little bitch
Debbie Hicks chapter 15 . 6/13
16.
Chapter 16.
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