Reviews for Mabel Haunted |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You hurt me so bad... but, like, in the good way. I think this is one of my favorite GF fics (that isn't TAU) now! Thank you again for letting me know this really was finished! Sorry that you didn't get exactly 100 reviews on here, but 101 is still a good number too, right? ' |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ghost thermos? I see you. ;3 |
![]() ![]() One of my favorite stories on this site. It was an amazing read, and I really felt like I was back in the sleepy town of Gravity Falls. Bless. |
![]() ![]() Hey, moron...Update the Mabel Vampire story...it was good. |
![]() ![]() I'm not crying before my chem final, you're crying before your chem final. |
![]() ![]() So I read the reviews and everyone want to hug Mabel But that wasn't the case for me I really felt bad for dipper He had to wait a whole year without talking to anyone while hoping that Mabel comes back And when she finally does and he starts to take care of her (the lights and the curtains and all that) she just puts him in a container in liquid form. He wanted to be loved again... I would love it if you wrote a one shot where dipper isn't really gone and he's just stuck there and then ford brings him out to study him or maybe just talk to him |
![]() ![]() Really good story, very much like Gravity Falls would have written it! It's an odd combination with the dark subject matter and the lighthearted writing style. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing! And I'm not sure bit did you reference the Fenton thermos? if so your awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG you literally made me cry. IT WAS SOO SAD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh, just for a quick note, I'd like to say that I'm not fandom-blind.. but I've never exactly tampered within the gravity falls side of fanfiction, so this is one of the first few times and I'm excited! :D. Right, first of all, I'd like to compliment on your writing, I really adore it! What with Stanford and Stanley. I really need to applaud you on. Their personalities and characterisation is the same as that on the show, so having read OOC fics before that only ends up in getting me reluctant or turning me away, this is a first and it really drags me in further. That being said, your dialogues are similar to what the actual characters would say on the show, so that's very promising! At first, I was a bit put down at the beginning.. I skimmed through the flashback because it's just a bad habit I have, only turning back to it after I've finished the entire chapter. I thought the scene after it was a little too rushed and it got me wondering why you were focused on Mabel, instead of Dipper. It wasn't until the mentioning of the luggage did I realise- Dipper wasn't there, he really wasn't. That was all it took for me to get hooked. I felt this nagging feeling in my chest when Mabel took the bag, covered it in stickers.. and now I'm just entirely curious, internally questioning myself on what happened to Dipper. From the flashback, it seems like she was holding his lifeless body, showing that he was dead.. but there's an edge of curiosity that makes me wonder.. Or, maybe even if he truly was gone, there must be more to it! After all, gravity falls is full of secrets ;) (I'm going to go ahead and read the rest, I suppose..) |
![]() ![]() This is the best story where one of the pines die before that I have ever read. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was that a Danny Phantom reference. I'm so happy |
![]() ![]() I cried SO MUCH while reading this. I even stopped breathing for a while. Agh! |
![]() ![]() ![]() [GOOD PAIN] |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good ending to a good story. It's sad that she'll never have her brother back and that the ghost caused so much trouble and pain for her and her family/friends, but it's good that she can still remember the good times. This is a wonderful creative story with a good amount of horror and drama. It's well written and was entertaining to read. Good story. |