Oh! It makes more sense now! It was me mixing, not you

I’m sorry, but I’m a bit confused over The use of norwegian and bulgarian in this story? It seems as though you believe they can understand one another or that they are close geographically speaking? It is a negative on both of these. Bulgarian is nothing like norwegian and The countries are almost as far apart as you can get on the small continent. Are you mixing them with other countries?
Otherwise your story is intriguing and very well written! It’s great!

Pretty good

I couldn't finish this without leaving a review. Fantastic! The character interaction is brilliant. Snape and Dem being my favourite (I swear I died laughing at their first interaction at the Yule Ball - the points thing). Looking forward to the next instalment immensely.

Side note - Finn better follow Dem to Hogwarts because I'll miss him too much otherwise. Although Trelawny prediction makes me think I'll regret saying this :-S

Hibiscus

This has honestly got to be one of the best fanfictions that I've read in a while and I'm really excited to start reading the second book!

Oh it's so perfect! Such a brilliant message too! Life goes on, you have to keep living! I love she's with Lupin, I hope we get to see a but if that come the sequel and I honestly am now wondering if she's gonna go back to durmstang or if she's gonna go to hogwarts! I really hope Finn can transfer too cause I'll miss him if he doesn't. So glad she gave her winnings yo Fred and George, so cute and I cannot wait to see more of them in the future! I'm so excited for the next book, can't wait to see how she deals with umbridge and all of the mishaps of fifth year! Please update soon, I'll be following you. Such an amazing story! I'm so grateful you continued to update!

OMG THIS WAS INTENSEEE

You are an angel! An actual angel sent from heaven! This chapter was just...ahhhh! I loved it all! She's staying with Lupin and I'm so happy their relationship is gonna build! She's not getting over Cedric any time soon and it's awful to see her so upset! I hope the goodbyes from Finn and Viktor and Grigor aren't gonna be too sad but they will be heartfelt. She's definitely staying at hogwarts next year cause I'm just as interested to know about Lumens as she is! I wonder what house you'll sort her into! Thank you so much for putting this chapter out for me (and everyone else) and making it so long! This story has been an incredible journey and I cannot wait to read the sequel and more! I have loved every moment of this!

CLIFFHANGER!

This hurts. This is hard. I was so angry with her for saying friend, for letting her fear overtake her, but I'm so glad that she found her courage and went against the death eaters. Plus, cutting ties to her grandfather to keep him safe was absolutely heartbreaking. The only family she has left and she had to lose him! Plus Cedric? I knew it was coming but I'm still heartbroken! Is there any chance you can upload the next chapter tonight? I just have to see how she deals with all of this, it's a lot to go through and I hope George is there for her when she has to deal with it. Heartbreaking chapter, but I loved it!

THIS WAS INTENSE

This is an amazing story and don't think for a second that the number of reviews makes the story any less. You are doing fabulously, so keep going if that is what you truly want. Best of luck and oh my username is clarydarcy was too lazy to sign in

No! No! No! I love how you had Moody try to lock her up and how she and Snape trust each other and oh dear lord I cannot wait for the next chapter! I have to know how you deal with everything that's meant to happen and if you change anything! This is incredible I am literally on the edge of my seat waiting to know what happens! I'm so happy she finally got to meet Remus! I hope they have a really close relationship! Please don't leave me hanging for too long! This was amazing!

This is an amazing story and I dearly hope you keep going! It was getting so good, then I went for the next chapter and then I realized I had finished the most recent chapter. It was a very sad moment in my life. Regardless I love the original characters you came up with and the character arc you are putting on them. I can't wait until George and Demetria get together honestly it's driving me nuts! Can't wait for the next installment! Best of luck!