glad it had a good ending! :D

and wow... im truly happy i read this. all my favorite fics are about 100,000 or more, i like long ones :P but this one...at 32,000 was absolute GREAT! you had amazing story, and great character interaction. the whole story always kept me right at the edge of my seat, always wondering what was going to happen next.

thank you for writing this!
and i wish more people would find this fic honestly, it deserves more attention.

-ZeyTheFox-

this fic is so addictive, every sentence brings new interesting developments.

im actually really sad that im almost half done already :( i feel this plot is so unique, and that it could easily go for well over 100,000 words, rather then just 32,000.

-ZeyTheFox-

you had me totally hooked at chapter 1 already.
but now chapter 2 has me even more curious :O

did Ed take all those people into him? is he like a pholaephers (forgive my spelling lol) stone now?

i also just want to add, your writer style is truly amazing :D its very detailed and seems professional to me.

-ZeyTheFox-

This was very nice, and I loved the way you set up an underlying tone of RoyEd. It was very beautifully crafted and I hope to see more FMA stories from you.

I LOVE THIS! It's short and sweet, with plenty of angst and mystery and such, but not drawn out in a hundy-million chapters. I love everything about this, from the plot and premise, to the character interactions and how in-character they are, and your interpretation of RoyEd (because it is a ship that makes some people unfomfortable, but this is really, really sweet in regards to them), and uuuugghhh. This is wonderful. Following because this seems like a nice ending spot, but also like there could be more epilogue-y stuff as well. Thank you so much for posting.

- Kelly

Roy DX You lost your alchemy DX XD
Loved it XD Wonderful XD

Roy... Ed...
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Can't wait for an update XD XD

No, bad Truth (*repeatedly hits Truth on the head*) BAD TRUTH!... Anyway enough with my ramblings. This story is amazingly badass (not proper English but eh..) and very much looking forward to the next chappie )

God, this chapter is so intense. Hope Roy will be able to save Ed soon.

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA! What's gonna happen DX
I can't wait for you to update XD
Excited now XD

Ooo...what alchemy is goin on! What's gonna happen to Ed? Keep up the amazing work! I can't wait to read more!

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What's gonna happen XD
Can't wait for an update XD
I really like this XD

Poor lady must be very frightened. Hopefully Roy and Armstrong will get some sort of information from her before she decided to shoot them.

I really like this...it's really unique and beautiful...I can't wait to read more! keep up the amazing work!

This is honestly one of the best stories I have ever read. All of the ideas about the Gate and Ed... I can't stop being amazed by it. Characters and the way you're developing the relationships is perfect. I also love the interactions between Roy and Ed. I can't get enough of it. I thought it was smart to add Riza and Roy's feelings for one another. Usually in edxroy fanfics I feel like Riza is always made so she doesn't have romantic feelings towards Roy. There's so much emotion in this story. Not one part of this did I find boring to read. It's so painful to wait for the next update!