Welcome back! I love the revised version and I’m happy you’re back updating, this is my favorite story.

I would like more chapters maester

Capital is a city. Capitol is a building,

This is such a great story, and I'm sorry I'm only finding it now. I still need to read the next chapter but Sansa's lie doesn't make any sense. She knows it's a political marriage and that Wyllis isn't about to call it off over a crazy man attacking her. All she had to say was that Dontos tried to repay her kindness by helping her escape, and she worked with him on it until her betrothal to Wyllis, but he must have gone mad or something and tried to help her 'escape' anyway.

This is fun to read, big improvement, and Sansa's mixed feelings are totally understandable. Marjorie will have to be reeeally smitten with Robb to give up her Queen plans...we'll see what happens! Thanks for your work!

Oh it was a nice chapter

Thinking like a genuine gentleman is difficult in westeros. Because gentlemen are betrayed and killed here.

Good job as always, I’m glad that you finally decide to continue this story! Please keep up the good work!

So happy to see an update this evening. And yes, I’m still enjoying your story with all the details. Looking forward to reading the next chapter

Welcome back and hope you stay with this story. Love it very much.

I love this chapter so much! I hope they take Sansa with them to meet Robb. Thanks for the update!

Why in hell would Doran marty his HEIR and allow her to go to Casterly Rock when she is meant to Rule Dorne !? Not happening. And for alliance Dorne already has Myrcella ! Where is Arya ? In the show she was at the Twins when the fighting started ?!

...felt overjoyed to be SEATED with... ...on his sister'S side... ...acted like a blushing MAIDEN... Robb's message arriving at this point is too coincidental. And could if discovered lend credance to the idea of a Tyrell, Stark plot. Very dangerous. What about Willas' papers left in his room ? And Where Is Arya !? Tywin will be furious with Cersi for wrecking his plans.

... Willas was SITTING... ...you TOOK foolish risks... ... he NEEDED to use Roose to gain entrance to... ...she was curently SEATED... ...

...the Rains of Castamere HAD begun... Robb should have told Walder that he had no wife. Not yet. No consumation meant no marriage. "We are not wed until we bed. And even so I could set her aside. As King I renounce this false marriage. She is yours, do what you will. You will still die and your whole House with you.! You'll be executed last so you can witness how badly you have failed.!" Just a thought.