This is great :), you shuld do more

Beautiful! So amazing! Thank you for this!

This was hilarious! Some of those lines just had me cracking up with the way they were worded, like when Bunny was arguing that Jack's fun and his fun were two different funs. XD

Good job on the progression of the development of their relationship too. You mixed in a lot of different emotions, which a lot of fanfiction authors don't do, but Jack and Bunny actually would experience all those emotions. You even threw in some sadness and heart to heart talks even though this story was meant to be humor, which is good. It means that the jokes you cracked weren't cheap and were based on very true and relatable experiences. Kudos for that.

Good job on this. It was quite cute. Keep up the good work and I hope you keep writing. I mean, not this story of course since it's a oneshot, but keep writing other things. You obviously have potential if you understand human behavior this well. Just keep working at it and who knows what you'll come up with in the future? ;)

This was adorable. I love Jack and Bunny bonding stories and your scenario wad hilarious. I think my favorite part was the egg painting scene when Jack and Bunny were starting to consider the other. Great work. I hope to see more from you in the future.

I enjoyed this. It was good seeing Bunny and Jack bonding with one another. I especially loved the prank that they played on the Groundhog. I wonder how, or if, the Groundhog will get revenge on them. Great short story!