Obi didn't speak Arabic. it was hindi or Urdu

This fic has potential. Dialogue is in line with the chacacters for the most part but some of it is too reactive. From the "super spies" in particular. Kinda playing things upa little too strongly with shock and the like in general. Tho I get that there is difficulty in balancing the character descriptions with that of the film. Still. Good job.

Piece of advice if you continue. Put in more and longer reaction sections in order to counteract the large sections of the movie. That's the reason these fics tend to get in trouble with those people flagging reaction fics.

I was right in that Tony still has his Arc Reactor even though this is after IM3. So I can only see 2 options here;

1. This is after sometime IM3 but before the scene where he gets the operation to get the remaining shapnel and Arc Reactor removed using the stabilised Extremis he had created.

2. This is after IM3 but Tony decided to not get the operation to remove the shrapnel and Arc Reactor.

Wait...Stark said his Malibu mansion doesn't exist anymore, which would mean this takes place after IM3, yet Tony confirmed he still has the shrapnel and arc reactor? Did this Tony not use the stabilized extremis or something?

make more ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! its so gooooood! PLEASE!

please continue this

This fan fiction is perfect. Author-sama, where do you disappear? Cry, cry. Still, I look forward to continuing. I want to say that I myself am Russian, but could not pass by this beautiful fan fiction. Fortunately, the translator was saving me. Thanks for this fan fiction, I will humbly wait for the continuation :)

hey! this is really cool so far, i love your characterisations (and i gotta agree, your new way of writing nat is much better lmao). i know im like, 2.5 years late, but id really love it if you could consider continuing it! ive really been enjoying reading it so far and id be thrilled if you continued it :P

great story, thanks ;)
can't wait for more
please continue
will they know that loki was controlet by thanos like clint?
will they se a future in 3 movie?
more please

Hey I know it's been like 2 years but I love what you did with this story and would love it if you continued

Hey you mind telling us devoted fans of yours when your next update is it’s been a couple years now and I’m hoping you haven’t abandoned us. If so please just do us a favor and let us know. I hate coming back every couple months to see its still the same mid movie chapter. I’m excited to see this till the end but only if you willing to give it. Love as always what you have so far..。ｏಥ‿ಥ (。･ωﾉ

I know it has been awhile, but this is a very good story. I love it! It's so well done and great!

Please update this

Hiiii I hope you continue this, I’m not sure when it was last updated. I love it so far and I hope I can give you the moral support to continue and I hope you don’t have writers block (((; I LOVE YOUR STORY 3000!