| Reviews for The Demon God |
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   Keithbear666 chapter 2 . 8/6 You should look for ways to lengthen the fight and the interaction between the characters, otherwise it is more like a slideshow that is barely showing the minimum to call it such. Plus you aren't showing the reactions to the situation. I can't immerse myself with this. Please work on that so i can fully immerse myself into and enjoy the world you are building with this story. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/4 try to remake the story more realistic please |
| lucifertrust chapter 11 . 4/27 aha jokes on you i waited for you to finish this story before reading it |
| XenoLucifer chapter 5 . 10/20/2019 Why doesn't Naruto limit himself so he fought on the same level as the other students? I think this would've been more enjoyable to read for those who like to read about some action, and it also makes sense. His huge amount of strength is fairly suspicious and Naruto was always someone that liked a good fight. I do understand why you wouldn't want go write it, just a thought I had. |
| peinmastered chapter 7 . 6/8/2019 Just thought I'd point this out saying that Naruto's dick is 15 inches is a stretch as the world's record for longest dick is 13.5 inches plus having a very large dick is pointless more often than not having a very large dick actually makes it unlikely to hit a girls G spot as it goes right passed it you only need 5 to 9 nches to hit it. |
| jlee0799 chapter 12 . 9/24/2018 It would be cool to see a story with Naruto this powerful (all 10 tails worth) in the DC Universe as an anti-hero . |
| jlee0799 chapter 3 . 9/22/2018 I wonder how strong Tsukune will become. The strongest human ? |
| jlee0799 chapter 2 . 9/22/2018 I have to say, all this smug smirking is incredibly annoying . |
| Monster King chapter 15 . 5/29/2018 Great story I really liked it good job writing the story. |
| Hold777 chapter 3 . 2/3/2018 I see that Naruto at the end let his inner Nara out, good. |
| Fanficlover2017 chapter 15 . 12/23/2017 You story is really good however, it could do with more chapters and a sequel. |
| Oc chapter 4 . 8/7/2017 You just had to use that FALSE name that is not a name for female Kyuubi didn't you Thunderito-Baka?! |
| HurZysn chapter 15 . 7/15/2017 This was a good story |
| cy9223 chapter 15 . 6/28/2017 i was wondering if you could make a story where naruto teaches both iner and outer moka how to use the rasingan. anyways love the story and how you used the art of the cliff-hanger and the art of a thrilling story-line. |
| Merceni chapter 7 . 6/27/2017 This story lacks depth of character, like this review. unenjoyable overall |
