Reviews for Naruto
Hot4Sas chapter 1 . 5/24
Well well, just by the summary this fic sounded super juicy and promising (and for some reason I thought there were more chapters ugh!)
Loved the fluent dialogue between Sasuke and Narutor when they met, and the feeling of jumping from one to the other with little to no description in between. It was a new feeling. I’m used to your detailed descriptions which, mind you, I absolutely LOVE, but in this case it was like there’s was no time to describe (which IS funny since Sasuke was in a rush to go back to work and Naruto could barely talk before deciding to go with the flow and just help him). I don’t know if you did it on purpose, but it was a great way to depict it.
Which brings me to my next observation: another pushover Naruto, yay! (suits him) haha. Always so eager to please… At least Sasuke didn’t exploit him? And I love Shikamaru as Sasuke’s friend… It suits him. Them, I don’t know. Both good at something, but Sasuke’s responsible and Shika’s lazy but somehow Sasuke just trusts him… Wait, sounds like GMS.
Oh I LOVE mangaka Sasuke… Love Sasuke as a creator! Like, he doesn't show it but he's super creative/observant/aware of people and life, and have great ideas but it's not what anyone would normally think of him? Because he’s more reserved and introverted… But intense, at the same time. Just like SAM Sasuke. Loved this Sasuke: serious and bastard but hilarious at the same time (especially on the telephone).
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5
I was so sad to see this wasn’t finished, I was really looking forward to reading your story. You should most definitely keep writing! It’s really good!
Pat123 chapter 1 . 8/16/2019
the story is good I really hope you come back to it and update it
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2019
I want to read more of this masterpiece;0; it's SO good!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2018
awesome reread! I love their conversation, how snarky Sasuke is and how Naruto just jumps back with it.
Cafrye chapter 1 . 7/23/2018
I already like this! This wallet situation, totally a Naruto thing to do. I love that Nara is still lazy and Kakashi is the editor. Sasuke's attitude towards Naruto is on point, even the ways you make him call Naruto an idiot. The line where Naruto asks, "Wait, did you just insult me?" made me crack up and the part before that where Naruto is talking about not being a stalker and starts, "I am an . . ."
Sasuke finishes with, "Idiot." Genius.

I will be following this. thanks for everything you write.
EPICphantom104 chapter 1 . 7/13/2018
Please continue asap! I am actually in love. The pure adorableness of pushover!Naruto just being a nice guy to rude mangaka!Sasuke- it makes me so excited for more from this story! I get it if you don't, but seriously, please continue this. Thanks!
Miratriarch chapter 1 . 3/25/2018
who went and searched the manga "Uzumaki" after finishing this please raise your hands *me* anyone else?
Morizono Kat chapter 1 . 2/9/2018
wow! please continue with the plot
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2017
oh boy, this chapter had me so excited. This is gold.
Moonlime chapter 1 . 11/25/2017
awww~! this was cute! please continue! 3
Shiyue chapter 1 . 9/2/2017
Hahaha, this was awesome! Love the idea of them coming up with the idea to write Naruto. Hope you get around to writing another chapter. Even if you don't go too in depth with the storyline, it would be cool to see the mangaka Sasuke and assistant Naruto form a relationship:)
Momo chapter 1 . 8/10/2017
Ahah this one is too funny, I love the concept on how the manga started and how they met ( seriously who goes to somebody's flat to deliver a lost wallet?). I can totally see Sasuke as a mangaka btw. Sakura's last line made me cringe a bit but I also found it ironic ahah Thank you for writing and sharing it.
DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 1 . 7/8/2017
Hahaha what a cute and funny story and concept! I sure hope you do finish it some day because this sure was a great opening chapter :) once again, thank you for your writing!
Lady Spain chapter 1 . 3/24/2017
Please continue!
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