Reviews for Shattered
Meister1994 chapter 1 . 7/22
This is discontinued, right? If so, it was super super good
DorritosRBomb chapter 33 . 7/7
O.M. Goodness
LordlyDock98 chapter 23 . 7/6
I would like to say when you bleed out of your eyes firstly you see black not red and secondly your vision flips upside-down and your vision does not blur the black completely blocks some of your vision and the rest is clearly visible although upside-down.
StarOfOlympus chapter 57 . 5/12
One thing that I’m noticing more and more as I read is that you repeat a lot of words/phrases, such as orbs and daughter figure/best friend
StarOfOlympus chapter 29 . 5/11
Quick thing, umm did you mean to switch from he to she and vice versa a lot here? Cuz it kinda made it confusing to read.
xXKentonHatakeXx chapter 37 . 5/8
I'm not gay, and I think love is love. It's not my right to judge. I just like girls, not guys. I'm a guy. But frick that homophobic piece of garbage.
Redstoo chapter 50 . 5/6
Ooh. I thought this was the crossover chapter.
Redstoo chapter 34 . 5/5
F
Redstoo chapter 28 . 5/5
CPR intensify.
Redstoo chapter 22 . 5/5
Oh my god, yes! This fanfic is the chosen one. I finally found it and it worth my time.
Redstoo chapter 23 . 5/5
Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh! That is the sound of saticfaction, thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou. I can't say this enough but thank you this chapter is genius and the last one.
Redstoo chapter 13 . 5/4
Why do you have to switch from first person to thrid? It's not right.
Bobp0p chapter 8 . 4/27
So I know this is an old story, but this annoyed me so much. There were like 150 or so kids in the camp, as shown by the Hermes cabins overflowing, and the fact that children of ares, Aphrodite, and Apollo were prwtty common aswell
CatLuver chapter 22 . 4/18
Bianca!WTH.
CatLuver chapter 16 . 4/18
I really hate Annabeth.
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