Reviews for The maelstrom of Fairy Tail
Leo-Arctic chapter 4 . 9/18/2016
I like this alot
Shadow Joestar chapter 4 . 8/21/2016
KO awesome story, how old is Naruto again and what kind of magic will his little brother Raiden will learn? Can't wait to see some awesome action.
Dragoncyber22 chapter 4 . 8/19/2016
A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story
ncpfan chapter 4 . 8/17/2016
Good to see the story's starting to pick up, but we haven't seen anything of Kushina since Naruto reunited with his parents, and that's also all we saw of Raiden. Over a course of seven years, I would think that those moments where he's learning to reconnect with his family and getting to know his baby brother are really kind of important to the overall development of his character. Please show us some family moments that Naruto shares with his parents and sibling (or siblings, for all we know).
SHADOWNINJAMASTER chapter 4 . 8/17/2016
Awesome keep it up
Latherial chapter 4 . 8/17/2016
Interesting chapter, looking forward to what happens next.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/7/2016
is he going to have something better then wind magic he would get destroyed by any dragon slayer or god slayer and a lot of other people
S.o.L chapter 2 . 8/7/2016
The thing about this is you spent year's developing naruto into what? A weak ass mage thats what he is now dont get me wrong but i mean weak as in not just his magic but also his development as a character you skiped to much time and naruto didnt even change in personality or maturing at all, it felt like naruto followed the current happenings with no reson to get stronger and be more sensible, Naruto is lacking a goal to reach so therefore doesnt push hard enough to reach it, now that naruto is older and was taught wind devil slaying magic? From his master, wouldnt his master also try to push naruto as hard as he can?
Vikram chapter 1 . 8/6/2016
Great start bro
Hyungy chapter 3 . 8/7/2016
Honestly, the reunion between Naruto was pretty lacking. Kushina cried a little, Naruto got a little mad. After not seeing each other, there should have been way more emotion, and stronger feelings. Right now the story just feels a little rushed. The rest of the plot so far is okay.
Yojimbra chapter 3 . 8/7/2016
I am a sucker for a Naruto erza story.
meowy1986 chapter 3 . 8/7/2016
So far its a good story but there are a few things i dont understand.. i mena this is minato and kushina they would of def found naruto during those 7 years.. and then the naruto isnt pissed at his parents for just leaving him? they just left him and then go back to fairytail and pretend to forget about him and have a new child? lol if i were naruto i would want nothin to do with them
Latherial chapter 3 . 8/7/2016
Interesting story so far, looking forward to what happens next.
MR. SE7EN chapter 3 . 8/7/2016
cool chapter, but there are a lot of spelling errors; which in turn makes your story hard to read
Shizu Uchiha chapter 3 . 8/6/2016
Narutoxerza yesss!
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