...um, I’m no mathematician but 5000ft is not two miles. That’s not even a mile. Close, but no cigar. Now, 5000 yards, that would be better. Just pointing out an inconsistency.

the story is not bad but the fucking thing I hate is the whole blushing and stutter thing when they touch hands and shit. wtf this is not elementary. its fucking childish and dumb

HOLD UP! Earlier Tony said that the suits can go two miles deep but FRIDAY said that maximum depth is 5,000 feet. One mile equals 5,280 feet. That is 280 feet more than what is possible through FRIDAY's knowledge. They should have been dead long from now.

NO WHY BUCKY HE WAS MY FAVOURITE RRRRREEEEEE

That was butifule.

AutoCAD is fun.

Awwwwwwww...this is a great story, that shows that Annabeth and Percy are fated to be together forever...

Why does no one think of the super hero name "Riptide" sounds dope and it's pretty obvious

Ah, I should have waited and the answer would have been revealed (in regards to my review of chapter 11).

Since when has Perseus been immortal? I remember in a prior chapter—specifically chapter 2— that it was stated that he was still mortal, and I quote “In fact, he was mortal, just like a demigod, but even to the children of the gods he was unique, he wasn't really a Half Blood because of his power.”

Oh yeah, I’m also not that big of a fan of how Percy and Annabeth are nearly perfectly synchronized when it comes to their relationship. So far, they’ve fallen in love at the same time, come to the realization of their “crushes” at the same time, were confronted by their friends at the same time, and most recently they’ve thought of each other in a possessive manner (his Wise Girl, her Seaweed Brain) at the same time. There were more instances, but these were just the ones that I could remember off of the top of my head and you get the gist. I just think the near perfect synchronization is too cliché.
I know it seems like I’m just pointing out what I don’t like about your story, but I have enjoyed it, and I do love the premise, but sometimes I just point out what little I don’t like about a story rather than all that I do like about it.

Honestly, the only parts that I haven’t liked so far are how childish Percy and Annabeth are being about their relationship (I mean, seriously, blushing because their hands touched? What is this? The third grade? I get that this is basically the first relationship either of them have been in, so some leeway is expected, but still, they’re 16, not 8) and how quickly their relationship is progressing (I’ve always been more of a fan of build up than of love-at-first-sight, so when it seems like Percy and Annabeth have fallen in love with each other within an hour of meeting each other, I’m not the biggest fan of it). However, I will say that I have seen stories that I have loved despite the love-at-first-sight and how quickly the romance progressed—stories that have been able to pull that off—so even that’s not that big of an issue.

Thank you. I loved every second of this story.

Nice

i like tony as a father